Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，且表达不自然。建议练习使用完整句子，注意主谓一致，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: My favourite machine at home is a robot vacuum cleaner. It helps my parents by washing the floor and keeping the house clean.

제안: 回答中存在大量语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议学习正确的句型结构，使用恰当的词汇，并尝试用连接词组织句子。

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines play an essential role in our daily lives because they make housework easier and save us a lot of time.

제안: 回答表达不完整且语法错误较多。建议练习使用完整句子，明确表达原因，并注意时态和语法的正确使用。

예시: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me use it correctly and avoid damaging it.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议加强语法练习，使用简单明了的句子表达观点，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

예시: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions before using machines because it prevents damage and ensures correct usage.

× She wash the floor.

✓ She washes the floor.

主语是第三人称单数she，谓语动词wash应加-s变为washes，表示第三人称单数现在时。

× And make my home more clean.

✓ And makes my home cleaner.

这里需要动词makes来与主语she保持一致，且more clean应改为比较级cleaner。

× that's where she machines and sweeping machines placed an essential rose in my daily lives.

✓ that's where washing machines and sweeping machines play an essential role in my daily life.

原句中she machines错误使用了代词，且rose应为role，lives应为life，且动词时态和形式不正确。

× Excam makes our lives more convenience can also realize some housework.

✓ They make our lives more convenient and can also help with some housework.

convenience是名词，需用形容词convenient；句子缺少连接词and，且表达不完整。

× Yes, read the instructions can make a good use for me and I can know how to use a machine correctly.

✓ Yes, reading the instructions can be useful for me and I can learn how to use a machine correctly.

read应改为动名词reading作主语，make a good use不地道，应改为can be useful。

× It's also can prepared the machines.

✓ It can also prepare the machines.

句子语序错误，can后应接动词原形prepare，prepared是过去分词。

× Don't be home for me.

✓ Don't be harmful to me.

原句表达不清，推测意为“对我无害”，应改为Don't be harmful to me。

× Yes, I figured that it is important to read the instructions before us using the machines it can.

✓ Yes, I think that it is important to read the instructions before using the machines because it can...

us using不正确，应该用动名词形式using作介词before的宾语，且句子不完整。

× Required that we will don't harm the machines and usage correctly.

✓ ensure that we don't harm the machines and use them correctly.

句子结构混乱，required用法错误，应改为ensure，usage应改为use，will don't语法错误。