Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答が不明瞭で、質問に直接答えていません。具体的な機械の名前を明確に述べ、なぜそれが好きかを簡潔に説明することが重要です。

예시: My favourite machine at home is the microwave oven because it helps me heat food quickly and easily.

제안: 回答が不自然で意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に対して明確に意見を述べ、理由や具体例を付け加えると良いでしょう。

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save time and make household chores easier.

제안: 回答が断片的で文として成立していません。質問に対して簡潔に答え、理由を付け加えると良いです。

예시: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine to ensure I use it correctly and safely.

제안: 回答が短く不完全です。質問に対して明確に答え、理由や具体例を述べることで説得力が増します。

예시: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because it helps prevent mistakes and damage to the machine.

× Yes, yes. And I have. Smoke.

✓ Yes, I have a smoke machine.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper sentence structure. It should be a complete sentence with subject and verb properly connected. 'Smoke' alone is unclear; adding 'machine' clarifies the meaning.

× Was saying nothing is very convenient for. Our Lady. Life.

✓ Washing machines are very convenient for our daily life.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It lacks a subject and proper verb form. The phrase 'Our Lady Life' is likely a mishearing of 'our daily life'. The corrected sentence is complete and clear.

× Yes. Yes, I. Needle. Instruction. Use machine before.

✓ Yes, I need to read the instructions before using the machine.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper sentence structure. 'Needle' is likely a mispronunciation of 'need to'. The corrected sentence is a complete and grammatically correct statement.

× I think yes. Important it'll.

✓ I think yes, it is important.

The original sentence is fragmented and incorrectly structured. 'Important it'll' is not a correct phrase. The corrected sentence is a complete and grammatically correct statement.