Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够流畅且语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，清晰表达机器的功能。

예시: My favourite machine at home is the cleaning robot. It has an AI system that allows it to clean the entire room automatically without any help.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免重复，表达观点时更具体。

예시: Yes, washing and sweeping machines are very important because they help people clean their homes quickly and save a lot of time and effort.

제안: 回答中有语法和用词错误，表达不够连贯。建议使用完整句子，注意时态和词汇准确性。

예시: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because if I don't, I might make mistakes that waste time or even damage the machine.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的句式和词汇，避免错误表达。

예시: It is very important to read the instructions because they explain how to use the machine properly. Otherwise, you might encounter serious problems while using it.

× Turn the cleaner about have a AI in is a system so it it is able to clean the whole room drums for by by itself.

✓ The cleaning robot has an AI system, so it is able to clean the whole room by itself.

原句中动词形式混乱，且句子结构不完整。应使用正确的动词形式和句子结构表达清楚意思。建议使用简单句，明确主语和谓语。

× Yes, this machines are very important becauses.

✓ Yes, these machines are very important because.

此处指代复数机器，应使用复数指示代词'these'，而非单数'this'。同时，'becauses'拼写错误，应为'because'。

× It has a great function in cleaning, in doing housework.

✓ They have great functions in cleaning and doing housework.

主语为复数'machines'，谓语应使用复数形式'have'。'function'应为复数'functions'，且连接词使用'and'更自然。

× Using this machine, people uh, will not devoted and will not devote much time to do housework.

✓ Using these machines, people will not have to devote much time to doing housework.

'will not devoted'错误，动词应为原形或适当形式。'do housework'应改为'doing housework'以符合动名词用法。

× Yes, I have this. Uh, I have this habit reading the discussion before the machine 'cause if I don't read instruction, maybe I will do some mistakes while are using these machines, it will waste time or even. Break the machine.

✓ Yes, I have this habit of reading the instructions before using the machine because if I don't read the instructions, I might make some mistakes while using these machines, which will waste time or even break the machine.

原句中代词使用不当，缺少介词短语，且句子结构混乱。应使用正确的介词搭配'habit of reading'，并且注意复数形式'instructions'。

× Is very crucial to read the instructions to instruction tells people how to use the machine efficiently.

✓ It is very crucial to read the instructions because the instructions tell people how to use the machine efficiently.

句子缺少主语，应加上'It'。'instruction'应为复数形式'instructions'，并且连接词使用'because'更合适。

× If you don't do this. You will have some big shovels while using it.

✓ If you don't do this, you will have some big problems while using it.

'shovels'用词错误，应为'problems'。句子断开不连贯，应合并为一句完整句子。