Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在一些语法和拼写错误，如“Reef a fridge”应为“refrigerator”或“fridge”，“let overs”应为“leftovers”，“app listens”应为“appliance”。建议注意单词拼写和语法的准确性，同时避免冗余表达。

예시: My favourite machine at home is the refrigerator because it keeps food fresh for a long time. It also provides cold water, which is very refreshing during hot summer days. Therefore, it is an essential appliance in my daily life.

제안: 回答中有较多语法错误和拼写错误，如“a slip him rushing”不清楚意图，“alot alot”重复，“commit clothes”应为“clothes more clean”，“swapping machine”应为“sweeping machine”。建议加强语法和词汇的准确使用，避免重复和不连贯。

예시: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save a lot of time and effort for busy people. Washing machines clean clothes effectively, and sweeping machines help keep the floor clean.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“other ones technology”应为“other technologies”，“more defenses”应为“more efficiently”。建议注意句子结构和词汇搭配，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine because I am not very familiar with the technology. The instructions help me understand how the machine works and how to operate it safely. This way, I can avoid mistakes and use the machine more efficiently.

제안: 回答中有断句不当和词汇使用错误，如“Discount.”不合适，“insured”应为“ensure”，“reuse”应为“use”。建议注意句子连贯性和词汇准确性，避免断句错误。

예시: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions because they help you understand how to operate the machine correctly. This reduces mistakes, prevents damage, and ensures the machine works more efficiently. Additionally, following the instructions can improve safety.

× Not only does it help me store let overs but also provide cold water which is very refreshing during hot summer days.

✓ Not only does it help me store leftovers but also provides cold water which is very refreshing during hot summer days.

这里的动词需要与主语保持一致。'it'是单数，动词也应使用单数形式'provides'。另外，'let overs'应为一个词'leftovers'，表示剩菜剩饭。

× It makes is an essential app listens in my daily life.

✓ It makes it an essential appliance in my daily life.

原句中'app listens'是错误的词形，应为'appliance'（家用电器）。另外，'makes is'应为'makes it'，指代前文的冰箱。

× Yes I believe washing machine a slip him rushing are both important because they save alot alot of time and effort for those people who are very busy in daily life.

✓ Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are both important because they save a lot of time and effort for those people who are very busy in daily life.

'washing machine a slip him rushing'是错误的表达，应为'washing machines and sweeping machines'，表示复数形式。'alot alot'应为'a lot'。

× Also a washing machine can make this commit clothes more clean and swapping machine are. Clean the floor.

✓ Also, a washing machine can make the clothes cleaner and a sweeping machine can clean the floor.

'commit clothes'应为'the clothes'，'more clean'应为'cleaner'，比较级形式。'swapping machine are. Clean the floor.'语法混乱，应改为'a sweeping machine can clean the floor'。

× Yes, I usually read instructions before using a machine because I am not very familiar with other ones technology.

✓ Yes, I usually read instructions before using a machine because I am not very familiar with other ones' technology.

'other ones technology'缺少所有格，应为'other ones' technology'，表示“其他机器的技术”。

× The instructions helped me understand how the machine works and what I need to do to operate it safely.

✓ The instructions help me understand how the machine works and what I need to do to operate it safely.

这里描述的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时'have'，而非过去时'helped'。

× This way I can avoid making mistakes and use the machine more defenses eventually.

✓ This way I can avoid making mistakes and use the machine more efficiently eventually.

'more defenses'用词错误，应为'adverb'形式'more efficiently'，表示“更有效地”。

× Yes, I think it's very important to read the instructions because they help you understand how to operate the machine correctly. Discount. Less mistakes and prevent damage or insured the machine works more efficiently.

✓ Yes, I think it's very important to read the instructions because they help you understand how to operate the machine correctly, reduce mistakes, prevent damage, and ensure the machine works more efficiently.

原句中'Discount. Less mistakes and prevent damage or insured'语法混乱，应改为'reduce mistakes, prevent damage, and ensure'，使用正确的动词形式和连接词。

× Additionally, following the instructions can improve safety reuse.

✓ Additionally, following the instructions can improve safety use.

'safety reuse'表达不正确，应为'safety use'，表示“安全使用”。