Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议注意句子结构，避免语法错误，并且补充更具体的细节，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner because it keeps my room at a comfortable temperature all year round. For example, during the hot summer, it helps me stay cool when I am studying or relaxing.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，建议注意时态一致性，避免句子未完成，同时可以增加连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Yes, I think both washing machines and sweeping machines are very important. Washing machines save me a lot of time, especially when I am tired and don't want to wash clothes by hand. They help me clean clothes quickly and efficiently.

제안: 回答表达较为清晰，但句子断裂影响流畅性，建议使用连贯的句子结构，并适当使用连接词。

예시: No, I usually don't read the instructions because they are too long and complicated. Instead, I prefer watching tutorial videos online, for example on YouTube, which show me step by step how to use the machine.

제안: 回答中存在词汇错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议注意单词拼写和句子结构，提供更准确的词汇和清晰的表达。

예시: Yes, I think it's very important to read the instructions because they help us understand how to use the product correctly. For example, when I bought a new kettle, the instructions showed me how to use it safely and clean it properly. This helps me use it better and makes it last longer.

× The air condition in my favorite machine in my home, it keeps my room at a comfortable temperature or year round, which is really important for me.

✓ The air conditioner is my favorite machine in my home; it keeps my room at a comfortable temperature all year round, which is really important for me.

“air condition” 应为“air conditioner”，因为指的是空调设备，属于单数名词。并且“year round”前应加“all”表示全年。

× For example in hold summer it cause me down when I'm starting or relaxing.

✓ For example, in hot summer it cools me down when I'm studying or relaxing.

“hold summer”应为“hot summer”，是拼写错误；“cause me down”应为“cools me down”，动词时态和用法错误；“starting”应为“studying”，语义错误。

× Washing machines saves me a lot of time.

✓ Washing machines save me a lot of time.

主语“Washing machines”为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“save”，而非“saves”。

× IK specially when I'm tired and don't want to wash clothes by hand, it helps me clean the clothes quickly and.

✓ I think especially when I'm tired and don't want to wash clothes by hand, it helps me clean the clothes quickly.

“IK”应为“I think”，拼写错误；句子不完整，需补全。

× Instead I prefer watching the tutorial videos online, for example. On YouTube.

✓ Instead, I prefer watching tutorial videos online, for example, on YouTube.

“for example”后面不应断句，应与后文连贯；“on YouTube”应与前句连贯，不能单独成句。

× They sure it step by step how to use the machine.

✓ They show step by step how to use the machine.

“They sure it”语法错误，应为“They show”，动词使用错误。

× Yes, I think it's very important as the instructions have us understand how to use the product correctly.

✓ Yes, I think it's very important as the instructions help us understand how to use the product correctly.

“have us understand”用法错误，应为“help us understand”，表达帮助某人理解。

× For example, when I bought a GNU Cattle, the instructions showed me how to use it safely and clean it.

✓ For example, when I bought a new kettle, the instructions showed me how to use it safely and clean it.

“GNU Cattle”应为“new kettle”，拼写错误且词不达意。

× This helps me use it better and the mic satre last.

✓ This helps me use it better and makes it last longer.

“mic satre last”无意义，应为“makes it last longer”，表达使其使用寿命更长。