Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Try to avoid unclear phrases like 'claws very ugh plausible vibe' and focus on explaining why you like the washing machine with simple, correct sentences. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

예시: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it helps me clean my clothes quickly and efficiently. I use it almost every day, especially after outdoor activities when my clothes get dirty. It saves a lot of time compared to washing by hand.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many incomplete sentences. Try to organize your thoughts before speaking and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Focus on giving specific reasons why these machines are important.

예시: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they help keep our homes clean and save time. For example, washing machines clean clothes quickly, and sweeping machines make cleaning floors easier, which is helpful for busy people.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but is difficult to understand due to grammar and unclear phrases. Try to speak in complete sentences and explain your points clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

예시: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a new machine because modern devices often have many buttons and functions. For example, recently I used a new washing machine with buttons placed in unusual positions, so reading the manual helped me understand how to use it properly.

제안: Your answer has a good main idea but is unclear and repetitive. Try to express your opinion clearly and avoid unnecessary repetition. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: Yes, I believe it is very important to read the instructions when we buy a new machine. Many people ignore the manual and throw it away, but reading it helps us understand how to use the machine safely and effectively from the start.

× the washing machine placing vital role in a household

✓ the washing machine plays a vital role in a household

The original sentence lacks the verb 'plays' and uses 'placing' incorrectly. The correct form is 'plays' to indicate the action of the washing machine in singular form.

× Sometimes there is a need of cleaning clothes and some dirts

✓ Sometimes there is a need to clean clothes and some dirt

The phrase 'need of' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'need to' followed by the base verb. Also, 'dirts' is uncountable and should be 'dirt'.

× which caused the claws very ugh plausible vibe

✓ which caused the clothes to have a very unpleasant smell

The phrase 'claws very ugh plausible vibe' is unclear and incorrect. It should be 'clothes to have a very unpleasant smell' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× I always used it in Malaya

✓ I always use it in Malaya

The sentence refers to a habitual action in the present, so present tense 'use' is appropriate instead of past tense 'used'.

× without this machine, there is a I think that there is a new existence of household becauses in household there is a one of the most important thing is a closed

✓ without this machine, I think there would be no proper household because one of the most important things in a household is clothes

The original sentence has pronoun confusion and unclear structure. Correct pronoun use and clearer sentence structure improve understanding.

× So we should wear. So we should wash your clothes daily and and wear it. So there's I think.

✓ So we should wash our clothes daily and wear them. That's what I think.

Pronouns should be consistent; 'your' should be 'our' to match the speaker's perspective, and 'it' should be 'them' referring to clothes (plural).

× I always read instructions before using a particular machine becaused at present time there is a error of new technology

✓ I always read instructions before using a particular machine because at present there are errors with new technology

The phrase 'becaused at present time there is a error of new technology' is incorrect. 'Because' is the correct conjunction, and 'errors with new technology' is the proper phrase.

× and new technologies that come with the new buttons and other functions

✓ and new technologies that come with new buttons and other functions

The article 'the' before 'new buttons' is unnecessary here; removing it makes the sentence more natural.

× So at that time they structured reading is a must

✓ So at that time, reading the instructions is a must

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Correct sentence structure clarifies the meaning.

× recently we write up a new technology over which has the buttons on their below side

✓ Recently, we wrote about a new technology that has buttons on its lower side

The phrase 'write up a new technology over which has the buttons on their below side' is incorrect. Correct prepositions and possessive pronouns improve clarity.

× So at that time we should re in

✓ So at that time we should read it

The phrase 're in' is unclear and likely a typo. Correct pronoun 'it' refers to the instructions.

× it is the one of the most important thing to should do

✓ it is one of the most important things to do

The phrase 'the one of the most important thing to should do' is incorrect. Correct form is 'one of the most important things to do'.

× there is a book of instruction we should they should give many people tear the book and throw it away

✓ there is a book of instructions, but many people tear the book and throw it away

The original sentence misuses pronouns and conjunctions. Correct pronouns and conjunctions improve clarity.

× But it this is the one of the most important we should read 2 starter machine

✓ But this is one of the most important things; we should read it to start the machine

The sentence has pronoun confusion and unclear wording. Correct pronouns and clearer phrasing improve understanding.