Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan ejaan, serta buat kalimat lebih alami dan efektif. Hindari kesalahan seperti 'fries' yang seharusnya 'fresh' dan 'makes eyes' yang tidak jelas. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih koheren dan jelas.

예시: My favorite machine at home is the refrigerator because it helps keep food and drinks fresh for a long time. For example, I can store fruits, vegetables, and beverages like juice or water, which makes it very convenient. It also cools drinks, which is great during hot days.

제안: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan bentuk jamak yang tepat. Tambahkan kalimat penutup yang lengkap agar jawaban lebih efektif dan alami.

예시: Of course, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they help us complete household chores more quickly and efficiently. For example, a washing machine saves a lot of time compared to washing clothes by hand. These machines make daily life easier and allow us to focus on other tasks.

제안: Jawaban kurang jelas dan tidak koheren. Gunakan kalimat lengkap dan jelas untuk menjelaskan alasan membaca instruksi sebelum menggunakan mesin.

예시: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how to use it properly and safely.

제안: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan ejaan, serta buat kalimat lebih jelas dan lengkap. Hindari pengucapan yang tidak jelas dan gunakan contoh yang koheren.

예시: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me operate it safely and correctly. For example, when I use a new kitchen appliance, the guide explains its functions and precautions, which helps prevent mistakes and accidents. Therefore, reading the instructions saves time and ensures safety.

× My favorite machine is. Refrigerators because it's helps keep food and drinks fries for a long time.

✓ My favorite machine is the refrigerator because it helps keep food and drinks fresh for a long time.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'it's helps' which is a combination of 'it is' and 'helps'. The correct form is 'it helps' (third person singular present tense). Also, 'fries' is incorrect; the intended word is 'fresh'. Additionally, 'Refrigerators' should be singular 'refrigerator' to match 'My favorite machine is'.

× My favorite machine is. Refrigerators because it's helps keep food and drinks fries for a long time.

✓ My favorite machine is the refrigerator because it helps keep food and drinks fresh for a long time.

The verb 'helps' should be used with the singular subject 'it'. The phrase 'it's helps' is incorrect because 'it's' means 'it is' and cannot be followed by another verb. The correct form is 'it helps'.

× My favorite machine is. Refrigerators because it's helps keep food and drinks fries for a long time.

✓ My favorite machine is the refrigerator because it helps keep food and drinks fresh for a long time.

When referring to a specific machine as a favorite, the definite article 'the' should be used before 'refrigerator'.

× For example, I can store fruits, vegetables and beverages like juice or water which make it very convenient.

✓ For example, I can store fruits, vegetables, and beverages like juice or water, which makes it very convenient.

A comma is needed before 'which' to introduce a non-restrictive clause. Also, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'which' referring to the act of storing.

× It also makes eyes which is great for cooling drinks during hot days.

✓ It also makes ice, which is great for cooling drinks during hot days.

The word 'eyes' is incorrect; the intended word is 'ice'. Also, a comma is needed before 'which' to introduce a non-restrictive clause.

× Of course, washing machine and sweeping machine are very important because they help us complete household chores more quickly and efficiently.

✓ Of course, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they help us complete household chores more quickly and efficiently.

When referring to machines in general, the plural form 'washing machines' and 'sweeping machines' should be used.

× This machine make daily life easier and allow us to focus on other.

✓ This machine makes daily life easier and allows us to focus on other things.

The verbs 'make' and 'allow' should be in third person singular form 'makes' and 'allows' to agree with the singular subject 'machine'. Also, 'other' should be followed by a noun like 'things'.

× This machine make daily life easier and allow us to focus on other.

✓ This machine makes daily life easier and allows us to focus on other things.

The pronoun 'other' is incomplete and should be followed by a noun such as 'things' to complete the meaning.

× Yes I do. I read the instructions before using a machine be 'cause it helps me too. Use that machine. Write an. Give a guide.

✓ Yes, I do. I read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me use that machine properly and provides a guide.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'be 'cause' should be 'because'. The phrases 'Use that machine. Write an. Give a guide.' are incomplete and need to be combined into a coherent sentence.

× Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how to operate it safely and correctly.

✓ Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because they help me understand how to operate it safely and correctly.

The pronoun 'it' refers to 'instructions' which is plural, so 'they' should be used instead of 'it'.

× For example, when I use a new kitchen applies. Uh plans. The guide explained the functions an precautions which performed mistakes and accidents.

✓ For example, when I use a new kitchen appliance, the guide explains the functions and precautions which prevent mistakes and accidents.

'Applies' should be 'appliance'. The sentence fragments 'Uh plans.' is unclear and removed. 'Explained' should be present tense 'explains' to match the context. 'An' should be 'and'. 'Which performed mistakes and accidents' is incorrect; it should be 'which prevent mistakes and accidents'.

× Therefore, reading the instruction save time and.

✓ Therefore, reading the instructions saves time and effort.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. The verb 'save' should be 'saves' to agree with singular subject 'reading'. The sentence is incomplete and needs an object like 'effort'.