Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语言不够自然流畅，有语法错误和表达重复，建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并注意语法正确性。

예시: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because I have many clothes to wash every day. It is very convenient and helps me save a lot of time.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和口语化表达，且句子不完整，建议使用完整句子并避免重复词汇，使表达更清晰。

예시: I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they help people do household chores and save time.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议使用正确的语法结构，避免口语化错误，并清晰表达原因。

예시: I usually don't read the instructions before using machines because I find most household machines easy to use, and I prefer to learn by myself.

제안: 回答中有语法和发音错误，表达不清晰，建议使用完整句子，明确表达观点，并举例说明。

예시: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions, especially for machines like microwave ovens, because using them incorrectly can be dangerous.

× Well, I will say there are a lot of machines in my home, but I will say my favorite one would be washing machine.

✓ Well, I will say there are a lot of machines in my home, but I will say my favorite one would be the washing machine.

这里缺少定冠词“the”，因为“washing machine”是特指家里的那台洗衣机。

× Partly because I have varieties of clothes that need to wash every day, so I think it's a convenient for me can help me save many time.

✓ Partly because I have a variety of clothes that need to be washed every day, so I think it's convenient for me and can help me save a lot of time.

“varieties of clothes”应改为“a variety of clothes”，表示“各种各样的衣服”；“need to wash”应改为被动语态“need to be washed”；“it's a convenient”中“convenient”是形容词，不需要冠词“a”；“save many time”应改为“save a lot of time”，因为“time”是不可数名词。

× As for me, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very crucial all simply be 'cause it can help people do some household and and save their time.

✓ As for me, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very crucial simply because they can help people do some household chores and save their time.

“all simply be 'cause”应改为“simply because”，更符合口语表达；“it can help”应改为“they can help”，因为主语是复数；“do some household”不完整，应为“do some household chores”；重复的“and and”应去掉一个。

× Well I basically don't read the instructions before using machine all simply because I often think bolster household machines are very easy to use and am a lazy person so I don't like race sound instructions.

✓ Well, I basically don't read the instructions before using machines simply because I often think most household machines are very easy to use and I am a lazy person, so I don't like reading instructions.

“using machine”应为复数“using machines”；“bolster”应为“most”；缺少主语“I am a lazy person”；“race sound instructions”应为“reading instructions”。

× Actually I will say yes, I think is is significantly rate the instructions. Uh, especially for some machines like microwave oven is down to rose to use them incorrectly.

✓ Actually, I will say yes, I think it is significantly important to read the instructions, especially for some machines like microwave ovens, as it is easy to use them incorrectly.

“is is significantly rate the instructions”语法错误，应为“it is significantly important to read the instructions”；“microwave oven is down to rose to use them incorrectly”表达混乱，应改为“microwave ovens, as it is easy to use them incorrectly”。