Machine— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и естественным. Следует избегать грамматических ошибок и избыточности, а также использовать связующие слова для логичности. Например, можно начать с прямого ответа, затем объяснить причину и добавить конкретные детали.

예시: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and energy. Moreover, it helps me keep my clothes fresh and clean, which is very important for my daily routine.

제안: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения. Рекомендуется использовать связующие слова для логичности и более точные формулировки, а также избегать неполных предложений.

예시: Yes, I believe that washing machines and sweeping machines are as important as refrigerators and cookers because they help keep our clothes clean and our home environment fresh, which is essential for a good quality of life.

제안: Ответ нуждается в улучшении грамматики и ясности. Следует использовать связующие слова и более точные выражения, а также избегать тавтологии.

예시: I don't always read the instructions because most machines are user-friendly and easy to operate. However, if I have a new machine that I am not familiar with, I definitely read the instructions first to avoid damaging it.

제안: Ответ хороший, но можно сделать его более естественным и связным, используя дополнительные детали и связующие слова.

예시: Yes, I believe it is very important to read the instructions when using a machine for the first time because this helps prevent damage and ensures the machine works properly in the future.

× I and keeping fresh and clean for me is very important in my daily life.

✓ Keeping fresh and clean is very important for me in my daily life.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'I and keeping fresh and clean' which is grammatically incorrect. The subject should be 'Keeping fresh and clean' as a singular gerund phrase. Also, 'for me' should come after the verb phrase for clarity.

× It absolutely to me a washing machine and sweeping machine are as important as fridge and cooker because I believe that keeping our clothes fresh as well as fresh air home is a. Crucial for keeping life standards and have.

✓ To me, a washing machine and sweeping machine are as important as a fridge and cooker because I believe that keeping our clothes fresh as well as fresh air at home is crucial for maintaining life standards.

The original sentence has incorrect modal verb usage and sentence structure. 'It absolutely to me' is incorrect; it should be 'To me'. Also, 'a fridge and cooker' need articles. The phrase 'fresh air home is a. Crucial' is fragmented and needs correction. 'Have' at the end is unnecessary and incorrect.

× I don't always read instructions before using because they are in majority.

✓ I don't always read instructions before using machines because most of them are user-friendly.

The phrase 'they are in majority' is unclear and incorrect. It should specify what 'they' refers to and use a clearer expression like 'most of them are user-friendly'.

× But if I have a new machine which are not familiar to me, definitely I would re instruction first in order not to break it.

✓ But if I have a new machine which is not familiar to me, definitely I would read the instructions first in order not to break it.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'machine' (singular), so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. Also, 're instruction' is incorrect; it should be 'read the instructions'.