Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to directly answer the question first, then provide specific reasons or examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I consider myself a patient person, especially when communicating with others. For example, I enjoy learning about different cultures and making new friends, which requires patience. Additionally, I am working on improving my speaking skills, so I take my time to practice and listen carefully.

제안: Your answer is confusing and does not directly address the question. Focus on clearly stating what makes you feel impatient and provide specific examples. Use linking words to organize your thoughts logically.

예시: I feel impatient when I have to wait for a long time without any activity. For instance, when watching TV or reading, if the content is boring or slow, I lose interest quickly. Also, I get impatient when I cannot communicate well with others due to language barriers.

제안: Your answer partially addresses the question but is unclear and contains filler words. Try to express your feelings clearly and provide specific examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: When I have to do something for a long time, I usually feel bored and tired. For example, studying the same subject for hours can become tedious. However, I try to stay focused by taking short breaks to refresh my mind.

제안: Your answer is off-topic and unclear. Directly answer whether your job requires patience and explain why. Provide specific details and avoid unrelated statements.

예시: Yes, my job as a student requires a lot of patience. For instance, I need to spend time understanding difficult subjects and completing assignments carefully. This helps me prepare for my future career.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Clearly state whether you are more patient now and explain with specific reasons or examples. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: Yes, I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child. When I was younger, I used to get easily distracted by cartoons and had little patience. Now, I can focus better and wait calmly for things.

× Hmm, only if they speak.

✓ Hmm, only if they are speaking.

The verb 'speak' should be in the present participle form 'speaking' after 'if they' to indicate an ongoing action. Using 'are speaking' correctly forms the present continuous tense here.

× Maybe because I really like study and I want to explore the cultural different other countries.

✓ Maybe because I really like studying and I want to explore the cultural differences of other countries.

After 'like', the verb should be in the gerund form 'studying'. Also, 'cultural different' is incorrect; it should be 'cultural differences' to correctly use the plural noun form.

× Maybe because I really like study and I want to explore the cultural different other countries.

✓ Maybe because I really like studying and I want to explore the cultural differences of other countries.

The noun 'different' is incorrectly used; it should be 'differences' to match the plural form referring to multiple cultural aspects.

× Maybe because I really like study and I want to explore the cultural different other countries.

✓ Maybe because I really like studying and I want to explore the cultural differences of other countries.

The preposition 'of' is needed to show the relationship between 'cultural differences' and 'other countries'.

× I want to make friends and learn new more about things about us.

✓ I want to make friends and learn more new things about us.

The quantifiers 'new' and 'more' are incorrectly ordered; 'more new things' is the correct order to express increasing knowledge of new things.

× Moreover, I want I also want to improve my speaking skill with me.

✓ Moreover, I also want to improve my speaking skills.

The phrase 'with me' is unnecessary and incorrect here. Also, 'speaking skill' should be plural 'speaking skills' to refer to general ability.

× Honestly speaking Dutch, hmm when I watching TV or when I read story or in my free time, I want to employ many people, many things from around the world, employers, other countries.

✓ Honestly, speaking Dutch, hmm when I am watching TV or when I read stories or in my free time, I want to learn about many people, many things from around the world, employers, other countries.

The verb 'watching' needs the auxiliary 'am' to form present continuous 'am watching'. Also, 'read story' should be plural 'read stories'. The verb 'employ' is incorrect in this context; 'learn about' fits better.

× Honestly speaking Dutch, hmm when I watching TV or when I read story or in my free time, I want to employ many people, many things from around the world, employers, other countries.

✓ Honestly, speaking Dutch, hmm when I am watching TV or when I read stories or in my free time, I want to learn about many people, many things from around the world, employers, other countries.

The noun 'story' should be plural 'stories' to match the context of reading multiple stories.

× But when I I like to play with my.

✓ But when I like to play with my friends.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'my'. Adding 'friends' completes the sentence meaningfully.

× Well from my experience I think that it will or it will bring more.

✓ Well, from my experience, I think that it will bring more.

The phrase 'it will or it will bring more' is redundant and unclear. Simplifying to 'it will bring more' improves clarity.

× If I do it in along the a long time umm it will become more and more tedious.

✓ If I do it for a long time, it will become more and more tedious.

The preposition 'for' is correct to indicate duration. Also, 'in along the a long time' is incorrect and should be 'for a long time'.

× You know umm make a PE, make a book, do perspective in the long run is very boring.

✓ You know, umm, making a PE, making a book, doing perspective in the long run is very boring.

The verbs should be in gerund form to act as subjects of the sentence. Also, 'do perspective' is unclear; assuming 'doing perspective' is intended.

× Do you enjoy the break? Well, yes, I I enjoy my I enjoy my work.

✓ Do you enjoy the break? Well, yes, I enjoy my work.

The repeated phrase 'I enjoy my' is redundant and should be corrected to a single clear statement.

× For example, I am a study, I am a student.

✓ For example, I am a student.

'I am a study' is incorrect; 'I am a student' is the correct form.

× So does I have to study for my infus for my fu from my future?

✓ So I have to study for my future.

The phrase 'does I have to' is incorrect; it should be 'I have to'. Also, 'infus for my fu' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation or error; simplified to 'for my future'.

× Yes, definitely I'm patient than when I will try, because when I was trying I just watching cartoon.

✓ Yes, definitely I'm more patient than when I was a child, because when I was young I just watched cartoons.

The phrase 'I'm patient than' needs 'more' to form the comparative 'more patient than'. 'When I will try' is incorrect; 'when I was a child' fits better. 'Just watching cartoon' should be past tense 'just watched cartoons'.