Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや時制の不一致があります。また、内容がやや冗長で、より自然で簡潔な表現が望ましいです。具体的な例を使い、文を短くまとめる練習をしましょう。

예시: No, I am not a patient person. For example, I feel anxious when I wait for messages from my friends or boyfriend.

제안: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。特に動詞の形や前置詞の使い方に注意しましょう。具体的な理由を明確に述べ、簡潔に表現することが大切です。

예시: What makes me impatient is waiting for someone. For example, when I wait for a reply to my messages, I feel anxious and nervous.

제안: 回答が長すぎて冗長であり、文法や語彙の誤りもあります。感情を表す語彙を増やし、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。また、話の流れをスムーズにするために接続詞を使うと良いです。

예시: I feel very tired and bored when I have to do the same task for a long time because I am not patient.

제안: 文法の誤りが目立ち、意味が不明瞭な部分があります。特に動詞の使い方と冠詞の使い方に注意しましょう。仕事ではなく学生であることを明確にし、課題に対する忍耐力について簡潔に述べると良いです。

예시: I don't have a job because I am a student. However, doing assignments requires patience.

제안: 回答が途中で終わっており、内容が不明瞭です。文法の誤りも多いです。質問に対して明確に答え、理由を具体的に述べる練習をしましょう。

예시: I don't think I am more patient now than when I was a child. As a child, I had many tasks and studied hard at school, so I was quite patient then.

× Actually, I am not a patient person because I feel very anxious when I was waiting, for example when I am waiting for my messages from my friends or my boyfriend.

✓ Actually, I am not a patient person because I feel very anxious when I am waiting, for example when I am waiting for my messages from my friends or my boyfriend.

The sentence incorrectly mixes past tense 'was waiting' with present tense context. Since the situation is general and ongoing, present continuous 'am waiting' should be used to maintain tense consistency.

× Umm, what make me impatient is the time to waiting person.

✓ Umm, what makes me impatient is the time waiting for a person.

The subject 'what' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' instead of 'make' to agree in number. Also, 'time to waiting person' is incorrect phrasing; it should be 'time waiting for a person'.

× Umm, what make me impatient is the time to waiting person.

✓ Umm, what makes me impatient is the time waiting for a person.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used before 'waiting'. The correct preposition is 'for' to indicate the object of waiting.

× For example, when I'm waiting for the reply of messages, I'm feel very anxious and nervous.

✓ For example, when I'm waiting for the reply to messages, I feel very anxious and nervous.

The phrase 'reply of messages' is incorrect; it should be 'reply to messages'. Also, 'I'm feel' is incorrect; it should be 'I feel' because 'feel' is a stative verb and does not use auxiliary 'am'.

× For example, when I'm waiting for the reply of messages, I'm feel very anxious and nervous.

✓ For example, when I'm waiting for the reply to messages, I feel very anxious and nervous.

The auxiliary verb 'am' is incorrectly used with 'feel'. The correct form is 'I feel' without 'am'.

× I'm feel very anxious and nervous.

✓ I feel very anxious and nervous.

The auxiliary verb 'am' is incorrectly used with 'feel'. The correct form is 'I feel' without 'am'.

× I'm feel very anxious and nervous.

✓ I feel very anxious and nervous.

The auxiliary verb 'am' is incorrectly used with 'feel'. The correct form is 'I feel' without 'am'.

× I feel very tired when I have to do something for a long time because I am not a patient person and I can't, umm, do the same thing for a long time because I feel very boring.

✓ I feel very tired when I have to do something for a long time because I am not a patient person and I can't, umm, do the same thing for a long time because I feel very bored.

The adjective 'boring' describes something that causes boredom, but here the speaker describes their own feeling, so the correct adjective is 'bored'.

× To be honest, I'm not work so because I am a student, but when I have to do my assignments or my tasks, I feel it requires a patience.

✓ To be honest, I don't work because I am a student, but when I have to do my assignments or my tasks, I feel it requires patience.

'I'm not work' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I don't work'. Also, 'a patience' is incorrect because 'patience' is an uncountable noun and does not take an article.

× To be honest, I'm not work so because I am a student, but when I have to do my assignments or my tasks, I feel it requires a patience.

✓ To be honest, I don't work because I am a student, but when I have to do my assignments or my tasks, I feel it requires patience.

'Patience' is an uncountable noun and should not be preceded by the indefinite article 'a'.

× Well, I don't think I'm more patient than I was a kid.

✓ Well, I don't think I'm more patient than I was a kid.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× When I was a child, I did many tasks every day and I went to a crime school and studied a lot.

✓ When I was a child, I did many tasks every day and I went to a cram school and studied a lot.

The word 'crime school' is incorrect; the intended word is 'cram school', which is a type of school for intensive study.