Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达清晰且内容具体，但有些语法错误和用词不当，如“make me frustrated”应为“makes me frustrated”。建议注意主谓一致，并尝试使用更多连接词使表达更自然流畅。

예시: Actually, I'm not a very patient person because I have a short temper. For instance, when I have to wait in a long line, I often feel anxious and eager to get to the front, which sometimes makes me frustrated.

제안: 回答内容具体且结构合理，但“deadline is closed”表达不准确，建议使用“deadline is close”或“deadline is near”。同时可以增加连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: I feel impatient when I have little time to finish my work. For instance, if I start a task late and the deadline is near, I get stressed and anxious, which makes it hard to concentrate. Therefore, the pressure of limited time makes me quite impatient.

제안: 回答内容丰富且结构清晰，但“for traveling”可改为“to travel”更自然。建议注意动词形式和介词搭配，使表达更地道。

예시: I think it depends on whether I enjoy the activity or not. For example, if I have to fly for 10 hours to another country to travel, I don't mind spending that time because I'm excited. However, if I have to work for a long time, I usually feel anxious and tired.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误，如“high demanding work”应为“highly demanding work”，“demands a lot of concentrations”应为“demand a lot of concentration”。建议注意形容词和名词的正确搭配，并简化句子结构。

예시: Actually, I'm a student, so I don't have a formal job that requires patience. However, when I complete homework like writing essays and data analysis, I need to be patient and focused because these are highly demanding tasks that require a lot of concentration and perseverance.

제안: 回答内容具体且有对比，但时态使用不准确，如“don't have a phone”应为“didn't have a phone”。建议注意时态一致性，提升表达准确性。

예시: Yes, honestly, I'm more patient now than when I was a child. For example, I feel much calmer waiting in line because I can use my mobile phone to pass the time. But when I was a child, I didn't have a phone, so I often felt anxious and bored while waiting.

× which sometimes make me frustrated.

✓ which sometimes makes me frustrated.

主语是单数的which，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式makes，保持主谓一致。

× if I start the task late and the deadline is closed, I get stressed and anxious and find it hard to concentrate.

✓ if I start the task late and the deadline is close, I get stressed and anxious and find it hard to concentrate.

这里的deadline是现在时态，应该用形容词close表示“临近”，而不是过去分词closed。

× if I had to fly out for 10 hours to another country for traveling, I don't mind spending such time because I'm excited to travel.

✓ if I have to fly out for 10 hours to another country for traveling, I don't mind spending such time because I'm excited to travel.

条件句中使用一般现在时表示习惯或事实，if从句应使用一般现在时have而非过去时had。

× those are high demanding work and demands a lot of concentrations and perseverance.

✓ those are highly demanding tasks and demand a lot of concentration and perseverance.

work是不可数名词，不能用复数形式；应使用tasks表示复数；high demanding应改为副词highly修饰demanding；concentrations应为不可数名词concentration。

× But when I was a child, I don't have a phone so I often feel anxious and bored while waiting.

✓ But when I was a child, I didn't have a phone so I often felt anxious and bored while waiting.

描述过去的情况，动词应使用过去时态，don't have应改为didn't have，feel改为felt。