Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Are you a patient person?
수험생
Well it depends on situation. I am patient in some conditions, for example when I dealing with my parents which require me to be patient.
시험관
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
수험생
For example, waiting for a delayed airplane or struggle in traffic congestions. They are make me feel like a waste of time.
시험관
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
수험생
I often lose interest when I doing something for a long time. It makes me feel exhausted and bored. But if it's something I really enjoy I can stay focused for a long time.
시험관
Does your job require you to be patient?
수험생
Yes, absolutely. I work as a retail manager and I am obligated we to maintain patient especially when dealing with customer service.
시험관
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
수험생
Yes, I think so. I have learned to manage my emotions better as I have grown older, and life experience also taught me the value of patience.
평가
총점
Part 1
Are you a patient person?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答时语法错误较多，且表达不够自然。建议注意动词形式和冠词的使用，同时回答应更简洁自然。
예시: It depends on the situation. For example, I am patient when dealing with my parents because they require understanding.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
점수: 65.0제안: 句子结构不完整，语法错误明显，且表达不够连贯。建议使用完整句子并注意主谓一致，同时使用连接词使表达更流畅。
예시: Waiting for a delayed airplane or struggling in traffic congestion makes me feel like I am wasting my time.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
점수: 75.0제안: 回答较完整，但存在语法错误，如动词形式错误。建议注意动词时态和形式，同时可以增加连接词使表达更自然。
예시: I often lose interest when I have to do something for a long time, which makes me feel exhausted and bored. However, if it's something I really enjoy, I can stay focused for a long time.
Does your job require you to be patient?
점수: 60.0제안: 语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，注意词汇搭配，如'patient'应为形容词，使用'patient'而非'patient'作为名词。
예시: Yes, absolutely. I work as a retail manager, so I need to be patient, especially when dealing with customers.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
점수: 80.0제안: 回答较好，表达清晰且内容具体。建议可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅。
예시: Yes, I think I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned to manage my emotions better as I have grown older, and life experiences have taught me the value of patience.
문법
× Well it depends on situation.
✓ Well, it depends on the situation.
这里的'situation'是可数名词，前面需要加定冠词'the'，表示特定的情况。
× when I dealing with my parents which require me to be patient.
✓ when I am dealing with my parents which requires me to be patient.
动词'dealing'前缺少助动词'am'，构成现在进行时；'which'指代复数时动词用复数'require'，但这里指代'situation'单数，应改为'requires'。
× waiting for a delayed airplane or struggle in traffic congestions.
✓ waiting for a delayed airplane or struggling in traffic congestion.
'struggle'应改为动名词'struggling'与前面动名词保持一致；'congestions'应为不可数名词'traffic congestion'。
× They are make me feel like a waste of time.
✓ They make me feel like a waste of time.
主语'they'后不需要助动词'are'，直接用动词'make'。
× I often lose interest when I doing something for a long time.
✓ I often lose interest when I am doing something for a long time.
动词'doing'前缺少助动词'am'，构成现在进行时。
× I am obligated we to maintain patient especially when dealing with customer service.
✓ I am obligated to maintain patience especially when dealing with customer service.
'obligated'后应直接接不定式'to maintain'，'we'多余且错误；'patient'应为名词'patience'。
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