Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Are you a patient person?
수험생
Yes, absolutely. I never shout or yell at others because I really cherish the relationships with others, no matter in friendship or the membership of our family.
시험관
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
수험생
I don't know actually, I really appreciate the relationships with others as I mentioned before and I really love my friends and family because they always provide help for me especially when I'm in trouble and they always show their love and trust for me too, so I think so.
시험관
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
수험생
Well, at the very beginning I might feel a little bit nervous about that because time consuming work really needs patience to finish. But as soon as it started you might forgot the feeling because you get into the job and you don't think about any feelings.
시험관
Does your job require you to be patient?
수험생
Yes, I think so. I am an English teacher and mainly teach the kids age from 3 to 8 which is really young so I need to be very patient with them. If I shout or yell to them they they might feel harm, harmful. So I think it is very important.
시험관
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
수험생
Yes, I think so. When I was a kid I was very young and naive and didn't know how to treat others better and maybe I would say something not that good to my friends or family but I didn't notice at that time. However, now I will be very patient and well-being about that.
평가
총점
Part 1
Are you a patient person?
점수: 75.0제안: 回答较为自然，但表达略显冗长且有语法错误，如“the membership of our family”应为“family members”。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并注意语法准确性。
예시: Yes, I am a patient person because I value my relationships with family and friends, so I avoid shouting or losing my temper.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
점수: 50.0제안: 回答没有直接回应问题，内容重复且缺乏具体细节。建议直接说明让你感到不耐烦的具体情况，并提供原因或例子。
예시: I feel impatient when I have to wait in long queues because it wastes my time and makes me anxious.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答较为自然，但存在语法错误和表达不够连贯的问题。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意时态和主谓一致。
예시: At first, I feel a bit nervous because long tasks require patience. However, once I start working, I usually get focused and forget about my feelings.
Does your job require you to be patient?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答内容相关，但表达重复且有语法错误，如“they they might feel harm, harmful”。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用正确的词汇。
예시: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because I teach young children aged 3 to 8. If I lose my temper, it could hurt their feelings.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答表达不够清晰，结尾“well-being about that”不合适。建议用更准确的表达说明现在更有耐心，并举例说明变化。
예시: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. I used to say hurtful things without realizing, but now I try to be understanding and calm with others.
문법
× I really cherish the relationships with others, no matter in friendship or the membership of our family.
✓ I really cherish the relationships with others, no matter in friendship or in the membership of our family.
这里需要在“friendship”后面加上介词“in”，以保持结构平行，表达“无论是在友谊中还是在家庭成员中”。
× you might forgot the feeling because you get into the job
✓ you might forget the feeling because you get into the job
“might”后面应接动词原形，不能用过去式“forgot”，应改为“forget”。
× If I shout or yell to them they they might feel harm, harmful.
✓ If I shout or yell at them, they might feel harmed or hurt.
“shout or yell”后应接介词“at”，表示对某人喊叫；“feel harm”不正确，应使用“feel harmed”或“feel hurt”表示感到受伤害。
× However, now I will be very patient and well-being about that.
✓ However, now I am very patient and well-behaved about that.
“well-being”是名词，表示“幸福、健康”，此处应使用形容词“well-behaved”表示“表现良好”，且时态应为现在时“am”。
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