Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınızda daha doğal ve net ifadeler kullanmalısınız. "It's changed to topic" ifadesi anlam açısından belirsiz ve konuyla ilgisiz. Ayrıca, cevabınızı doğrudan soruya yanıt verecek şekilde yapılandırmalısınız.

예시: Yes, I consider myself patient most of the time, but it depends on the situation.

제안: Duygularınızı daha açık ve tutarlı bir şekilde ifade etmelisiniz. "Happiness" (mutluluk) genellikle sabırsızlıkla ilişkilendirilmez, bu yüzden bağlamı netleştirmelisiniz. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizde daha iyi bağlantı kurmak için bağlaçlar kullanmalısınız.

예시: I feel impatient when I am angry, stressed, or anxious because these emotions make it hard to wait calmly.

제안: Cevabınızı daha açık ve anlaşılır hale getirmek için basit ve doğrudan ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizde dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltmeli ve anlamı netleştirmelisiniz.

예시: When I have to do something for a long time, I stay motivated by reminding myself that I will succeed if I keep going.

제안: Olumsuz ifadelerden kaçınmalı ve profesyonel bir dil kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, cevabınızı daha yapıcı ve detaylı hale getirmek için neden sabırlı olmanız gerektiğini açıklamalısınız.

예시: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because I often deal with difficult customers, and I need to stay calm to help them effectively.

제안: Cevabınızı daha düzenli ve akıcı hale getirmek için gereksiz tekrarları ve karışık ifadeleri azaltmalısınız. Ayrıca, geçmiş ve şimdiki zaman arasındaki farkı net bir şekilde belirtmelisiniz.

예시: I was very impatient as a child because I always wanted things to happen quickly, but now I have learned to be more patient.

× Sometimes I am, sometimes I'm not. It's changed to topic.

✓ Sometimes I am, sometimes I'm not. It has changed the topic.

The original sentence 'It's changed to topic' is incorrect because 'changed' is used without an auxiliary verb and the phrase 'to topic' is incorrect. The correct form is 'It has changed the topic' to indicate a change in the subject of conversation.

× Angry and stress, absolutely. And anxious and happiness, absolutely. And remorse. Yeah. Remorse. I can say that. That's all I think.

✓ Anger and stress, absolutely. And anxiety and happiness, absolutely. And remorse. Yeah. Remorse. I can say that. That's all I think.

The words 'angry' and 'anxious' are adjectives, but the sentence requires nouns to list feelings. Therefore, 'anger' and 'anxiety' should be used instead of 'angry' and 'anxious'.

× I just get one motivation and it is that will be go and OK man will go.

✓ I just get one motivation and it is that I will go and OK man will go.

The phrase 'that will be go' is ungrammatical. The correct form is 'that I will go' to express the motivation clearly. Also, 'will be go' is incorrect verb usage.

× It cannot change me or it cannot touch me. It cannot changes my feelings.

✓ It cannot change me or it cannot touch me. It cannot change my feelings.

The verb 'changes' is incorrectly conjugated after 'cannot'. After modal verbs like 'cannot', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'change' instead of 'changes'.

× Actually, yes, a lot because I work in call center and sometimes I talk with a person and he.

✓ Actually, yes, a lot because I work in a call center and sometimes I talk to a person and he.

The phrase 'work in call center' is missing the article 'a'. Also, 'talk with a person' is less common than 'talk to a person' in this context.

× He treats me like a **** sometimes.

✓ He treats me like **** sometimes.

The article 'a' before '****' is unnecessary when using a swear word or insult in this context.

× I hate all of the customers.

✓ I hate all the customers.

The phrase 'all of the customers' is grammatically correct but 'all the customers' is more natural and concise.

× When I was a child, I was so naughty, so I cannot I I was absolutely impatient.

✓ When I was a child, I was so naughty, so I could not, I was absolutely impatient.

The phrase 'I cannot I I was' is ungrammatical and confusing. It should be 'I could not' to indicate past inability, matching the past tense context.

× Like when? When we gonna come?

✓ Like when? When are we going to come?

The phrase 'When we gonna come?' is incorrect. The correct form is 'When are we going to come?' to form a proper question in English.

× We like I'm asking every time whenever we are running your car.

✓ I was asking every time whenever we were driving your car.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. 'We like I'm asking' is incorrect; it should be 'I was asking'. Also, 'running your car' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'driving'.

× Are we there yet? Or something like that? I cannot remember right.

✓ Are we there yet? Or something like that? I cannot remember right now.

The phrase 'I cannot remember right' is incomplete. It should be 'I cannot remember right now' to express the current inability to recall.