Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，句子结构较为简单且有重复。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免冗余。

예시: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because my mother always encouraged me to be patient in life. For instance, I can keep working on math problems until I find the correct answer, no matter how many attempts it takes.

제안: 回答不够清晰，语法错误较多，表达混乱。建议简化句子，明确表达原因，并使用连词使句子连贯。

예시: I feel impatient when I have to revise a plan many times but still cannot satisfy others, especially when they cannot point out the errors clearly.

제안: 表达中有语法错误和用词不当，句子较长且不够连贯。建议简化句子，使用恰当词汇，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I usually feel bored when I have to do something for a long time because it involves repeating the same tasks. For example, when I study for exams, I need to review the same material several times.

제안: 回答较完整，但句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: Yes, my job definitely requires patience because I work in finance. Even the smallest details, like every decimal point, must be checked carefully, so I often have to calculate repeatedly to ensure accuracy.

제안: 表达不够自然，语法和用词有误。建议使用更地道的表达，明确对比过去和现在的耐心程度。

예시: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. In the past, I often got bored when I had to repeat tasks, but now I can persist until I find the right answer, no matter how many times it takes.

× my mom always told me to be patient to anything in life when I was a child.

✓ my mom always told me to be patient with anything in life when I was a child.

这里的介词使用错误，应该用 'patient with' 而不是 'patient to'，表示对某事有耐心。

× my mom always told me to be patient to anything in life when I was a child.

✓ my mom always told me to be patient with anything in life when I was a child.

介词 'to' 用错了，正确搭配是 'patient with'，表示对某事有耐心。

× I can calculate the math until I get the right answer even though it will calculate many times.

✓ I can calculate the math until I get the right answer even though I have to calculate many times.

句中 'it will calculate many times' 主语不明确且时态不对，应改为 'I have to calculate many times'，表示需要多次计算。

× when a plane should should be revised many times by me, but can not satisfy the other and the others can no told errors and what may then unsatisfied.

✓ when a plan should be revised many times by me, but cannot satisfy others and others cannot find errors and may then be unsatisfied.

重复使用 'should' 是错误的；'can not' 应写为 'cannot'；'the other' 和 'the others' 用法不当，应为 'others'；'can no told errors' 语法错误，应为 'cannot find errors'；'what may then unsatisfied' 结构不完整，应为 'may then be unsatisfied'。

× I usually feel quite bored when I have to do something for a long time because it means that I have to face to the same tax for a long period

✓ I usually feel quite bored when I have to do something for a long time because it means that I have to face the same task for a long period

动词 'face' 后不需要介词 'to'，应直接接宾语。

× I have to face to the same tax for a long period

✓ I have to face the same task for a long period

单词 'tax' 应为 'task'，且 'task' 是单数，符合句意。

× when I study the exam I need to revise the same material repeatedly which is few times.

✓ when I study for the exam I need to revise the same material repeatedly several times.

'study the exam' 应为 'study for the exam'；'which is few times' 语法错误，应改为 'several times' 表示多次。

× my job definitely require the patience because I work in finance

✓ my job definitely requires patience because I work in finance

主语 'my job' 是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加 's'，变为 'requires'。

× my job definitely require the patience because I work in finance and which means that even the smallest details such as every decimal point must be carefully checked

✓ my job definitely requires patience because I work in finance, which means that even the smallest details such as every decimal point must be carefully checked

'the patience' 应为不可数名词 'patience'，不加冠词；'and which' 连接不当，应改为逗号连接。

× and which means that even the smallest details such as every decimal point must be carefully checked and this means that I need to calculate repeatedly to ensure all the figures are accurate.

✓ which means that even the smallest details such as every decimal point must be carefully checked, and this means that I need to calculate repeatedly to ensure all the figures are accurate.

句子开头不应用 'and which'，应用 'which' 引导非限制性定语从句，前面用逗号连接。

× in the past I often felt bored to the thing that needed to be done a second time

✓ in the past I often felt bored with things that needed to be done a second time

'bored to' 用法错误，应为 'bored with'；'the thing' 应改为复数 'things'，更符合语境。

× in the past I often felt bored to the thing that needed to be done a second time

✓ in the past I often felt bored with things that needed to be done a second time

介词 'to' 用错了，正确搭配是 'bored with'，表示对某事感到厌烦。

× now I can calculate to get the right answer even though it needs me to solve it for thousands of times.

✓ now I can calculate to get the right answer even though I need to solve it thousands of times.

'it needs me to solve' 结构不自然，应改为 'I need to solve'；'for thousands of times' 应为 'thousands of times'，不加介词 'for'。