Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免绝对化表达，如“Absolutely not”，可以用更自然的表达方式。同时，句子结构需更流畅，避免语法错误，如“driving in traffic jam”应为“driving in a traffic jam”。

예시: I would say I'm not very patient, especially in situations like being stuck in traffic jams or waiting in long lines.

제안: 回答中存在词汇错误，如“it's a wrist”应为“it's a waste”。句子结构不够自然，且表达重复。建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子。

예시: I feel impatient because waiting is boring and feels like a waste of time. For instance, being stuck in a traffic jam for one or two hours can be very frustrating.

제안: 回答较为自然，但句子连接不够紧密。建议使用连接词如“however”来增强逻辑性，同时注意语法，如“decided by situation”应为“depends on the situation”。

예시: It depends on the situation. If the task is boring, I often get frustrated. However, if it's interesting, I tend to lose track of time.

제안: 回答内容清晰，但句子连接稍显生硬。建议使用连接词如“because”来增强句子流畅度，同时避免重复表达。

예시: Yes, it does because as a student, I need to be patient when listening to lectures and reading textbooks to achieve good grades.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“make me have more patient”应为“helped me become more patient”。建议简化句子并使用正确的时态和词汇。

예시: Definitely. When I was a child, my parents helped me become more patient, but I couldn't control myself well. Now, I can manage my patience better on my own.

× I'm a person without any patience, especially in some situations like driving in traffic jam and standing in congestion lines.

✓ I'm a person without any patience, especially in some situations like driving in traffic jams and standing in congested lines.

这里的traffic jam和congestion lines需要用复数形式，因为表示多次或多处的交通堵塞和排队。

× From my perspective, I think it's boring and it's a wrist.

✓ From my perspective, I think it's boring and it's a waste.

wrist是手腕的意思，句中应使用waste（浪费）来表达时间被浪费的意思。

× when you're driving cars and you meet with a traffic jam, you need to cost one or two hours in this traffic jam.

✓ when you're driving a car and you meet a traffic jam, you need to spend one or two hours in this traffic jam.

动词cost不用于表示花费时间，应该用spend。meet后面不需要with。driving cars改为driving a car更自然。

× It was waste.

✓ It was a waste.

waste作为名词时需要加冠词a，表示“一种浪费”。

× it's decided by situation.

✓ it's decided by the situation.

situation前需要加定冠词the，表示特定的情况。

× If something is boring and I have to do it, a lot of times I will be angry about it.

✓ If something is boring and I have to do it, many times I will be angry about it.

a lot of times用法不太准确，many times更合适。

× If you want to get high marks, you need to be patient in listening to class and reading textbooks.

✓ If you want to get high marks, you need to be patient when listening to class and reading textbooks.

be patient后面接介词时应用when表示在做某事时保持耐心。

× Now at that time my parents controlled me to make me have more patient.

✓ At that time my parents controlled me to make me more patient.

patient是形容词，不可数，不能用more patient后面加have。

× But now I can control by myself, which makes me have more patient.

✓ But now I can control myself, which makes me more patient.

control是及物动词，需直接加宾语myself。have more patient用法错误，应直接用more patient。