Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. Make your answer more natural by correcting grammar and completing your thoughts. For example, say: "Yes, I am a very patient person and I have a high level of tolerance in many difficult situations. However, sometimes I do lose patience depending on the circumstances."

예시: Yes, I am a very patient person and I have a high level of tolerance in many difficult situations. However, sometimes I do lose patience depending on the circumstances.

제안: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary. For example, you can say: "I prefer to work quickly and follow a specific sequence, so sudden requests disrupt my workflow and make me feel impatient."

예시: I prefer to work quickly and follow a specific sequence, so sudden requests disrupt my workflow and make me feel impatient.

제안: Try to make your sentences more concise and use linking words to improve coherence. For example: "It depends on the task; if I enjoy it, I don't mind spending a long time on it. Overall, I consider myself a very tolerant person."

예시: It depends on the task; if I enjoy it, I don't mind spending a long time on it. Overall, I consider myself a very tolerant person.

제안: Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for clarity. For example: "Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because I often have to transcribe statements from speakers whose words are difficult to understand. It can be quite challenging."

예시: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because I often have to transcribe statements from speakers whose words are difficult to understand. It can be quite challenging.

제안: Make your answer more natural by correcting grammar and avoiding repetition. For example: "My mother always said I was patient even as a child. I tolerated my little brother when he annoyed or hurt me, and I forgave him every time."

예시: My mother always said I was patient even as a child. I tolerated my little brother when he annoyed or hurt me, and I forgave him every time.

× I post a a high level of tolerance and many difficult situations.

✓ I possess a high level of tolerance in many difficult situations.

The word 'post' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'possess'. Also, 'a a' is a typo and should be 'a'. The phrase 'in many difficult situations' is more appropriate than just 'and many difficult situations'.

× But sometimes I fail, depends on the.

✓ But sometimes I fail; it depends on the situation.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a subject for 'depends'. Adding 'it' and completing the phrase clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× This way it's interrupting my work.

✓ This way it interrupts my work.

The present simple tense 'interrupts' is more appropriate here to describe a habitual action rather than the present continuous 'is interrupting'.

× My job requires for me to be patient because it requires it from me to write statements from speakers that I cannot understand.

✓ My job requires me to be patient because I have to write statements from speakers that I cannot understand.

The phrase 'requires for me to be' is incorrect; the correct form is 'requires me to be'. Also, 'requires it from me to write' is awkward; 'I have to write' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× My mother always said that I was patient, even during my childhood.

✓ My mother always said that I was patient, even during my childhood.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× I was tolerating my little brother who was beating and annoying me much, and I was forgiving him each time for the mistakes he's doing, he's doing to me.

✓ I tolerated my little brother who often beat and annoyed me, and I forgave him each time for the mistakes he did to me.

The past continuous 'was tolerating' and 'was forgiving' are less appropriate here; simple past 'tolerated' and 'forgave' better express repeated past actions. 'Beating and annoying me much' is awkward; 'often beat and annoyed me' is clearer. Also, 'he's doing' should be past tense 'he did' to match the past context.