Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免语法错误，如“having a long cure”表达不清，应改为更准确的表达。同时，回答可以更简洁自然，避免冗余。

예시: Yes, I consider myself a patient person most of the time. For instance, I am willing to listen carefully to others. However, I sometimes feel anxious during long medical treatments.

제안: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，如“having a non queue”不合适，应改为“waiting in a queue”。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并注意词汇的准确使用。

예시: I feel impatient when I have to wait in long queues at crowded places like banks or supermarkets. To cope with this, I usually use my phone to distract myself.

제안: 回答中语法不够准确，且表达重复。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并用连接词丰富句子结构。

예시: I often feel impatient when doing something for a long time. However, I remind myself to stay patient because perseverance helps overcome challenges.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和句子不完整的问题。建议注意时态和主谓一致，句子应完整且逻辑清晰。

예시: Yes, my job as an HR specialist requires a lot of patience. For example, when I deal with conflicts among employees, I need to listen carefully and remain calm.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“learned to be state”不明确。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，避免重复。

예시: Yes, I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child. As a kid, I was often excited and impatient when I wanted a new toy. But as I grew up, I learned to be more calm and patient.

× I can be patient to listen to others, but in some situations, for example when I am having a long cure, I will be a little bit anxious.

✓ I can be patient listening to others, but in some situations, for example when I am having a long cure, I will be a little bit anxious.

动词后接不定式to listen不符合习惯用法，应该用动名词形式listening，表示耐心地听别人。

× When I am having a non queue in crowded place like bank or supermarkets I might feel frustrating but by coping with this I would plan my phone to distract my attention.

✓ When I am in a long queue in crowded places like banks or supermarkets, I might feel frustrated, but to cope with this I would use my phone to distract my attention.

短语non queue用法错误，应为long queue表示排长队；crowded place应为复数形式crowded places；feel frustrating应为feel frustrated，frustrated形容人的感受；by coping with this用法不当，改为to cope with this；plan my phone错误，应为use my phone。

× When I am having a non queue in crowded place like bank or supermarkets I might feel frustrating but by coping with this I would plan my phone to distract my attention.

✓ When I am in a long queue in crowded places like banks or supermarkets, I might feel frustrated, but to cope with this I would use my phone to distract my attention.

同上，crowded place应为复数places，bank应为banks，supermarkets复数正确。

× When I am having a non queue in crowded place like bank or supermarkets I might feel frustrating but by coping with this I would plan my phone to distract my attention.

✓ When I am in a long queue in crowded places like banks or supermarkets, I might feel frustrated, but to cope with this I would use my phone to distract my attention.

feel frustrating错误，frustrating是形容事物令人沮丧，形容人的感受应使用frustrated。

× When I have to do something for a long time, I will be impatient, but I tell myself that it needs to be patient to cope with difficulties.

✓ When I have to do something for a long time, I will be impatient, but I tell myself that I need to be patient to cope with difficulties.

it needs to be patient用法错误，主语应为I，且need为情态动词，不能用第三人称单数形式needs。

× Yes, as an HR specialist, it's important to be patient when you talking with employees.

✓ Yes, as an HR specialist, it's important to be patient when you are talking with employees.

you talking缺少助动词are，第三人称单数动词形式错误，应为are talking。

× For example, when I dealing with conflicts among employees, it's important to be a good.

✓ For example, when I am dealing with conflicts among employees, it's important to be good.

when后面应使用进行时态，缺少be动词am；句尾it's important to be a good不完整，去掉a。

× For example, when I dealing with conflicts among employees, it's important to be a good.

✓ For example, when I am dealing with conflicts among employees, it's important to be good.

a good后缺少名词，且此处应使用形容词good而非名词。

× Yes, definitely I have more patience now than when I was a child.

✓ Yes, definitely I have more patience now than I did when I was a child.

比较结构中省略了did，导致句子不完整，需补充did以保持句意完整。

× When I was a kid I was always excited and impatient when I want to have have a new toy.

✓ When I was a kid I was always excited and impatient when I wanted to have a new toy.

want应使用过去式wanted，与前文过去时态保持一致。

× But well since I grew up I learned to be state.

✓ But well, since I grew up I learned to be patient.

state用法错误，应为形容词patient表示有耐心。