Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınız doğal ancak bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var. "I wish I was" yerine "I wish I were" kullanabilirsiniz. Ayrıca, cümlenizi daha akıcı ve etkili yapmak için gereksiz tekrarları azaltmalısınız.

예시: I wish I were a more patient person because I tend to want things done quickly. However, I am working on improving my patience for the future.

제안: Cümleniz tam olarak tamamlanmamış ve bazı dilbilgisi hataları var. "a impatient" yerine "an impatient" kullanılmalı. Ayrıca, daha spesifik ve net ifadeler kullanarak cevabınızı geliştirebilirsiniz.

예시: I feel impatient when tasks I expect to be completed quickly take longer than anticipated, which makes me anxious.

제안: Cümleniz biraz karışık ve anlamı tam olarak net değil. "I do some list" yerine "I make a list" demelisiniz. Ayrıca, düşüncelerinizi daha açık ve mantıklı bağlaçlarla ifade etmelisiniz.

예시: When I have to do something for a long time, I make a list to organize my tasks. This helps me stay focused, and sometimes I even feel excited because I am working on something for myself.

제안: Cevabınızda anlam karışıklığı var; "impatient" yerine "patient" kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, cümleniz tekrarlar içeriyor ve daha net ifadeler kullanmalısınız.

예시: Yes, as a psychologist, I need to be very patient because I have to listen to my clients carefully and understand their issues in detail, which requires passion.

제안: Cümlenizde bazı tekrarlar ve dilbilgisi hataları var. "in a positive ways" yerine "in positive ways" demelisiniz. Ayrıca, daha akıcı ve doğal ifadeler kullanabilirsiniz.

예시: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. I try to look at things positively and take time to relax because impatience often makes situations worse.

× I tend to be a impatient person when when something that I expected to be done soon.

✓ I tend to be an impatient person when something that I expect to be done soon.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound as in 'impatient'. Also, 'expected' should be 'expect' to match the present tense context. The repeated word 'when' is a redundancy and should be removed.

× I tend to be a impatient person when when something that I expected to be done soon.

✓ I tend to be an impatient person when something that I expect to be done soon.

The verb 'expected' is in past tense but the sentence context requires present tense 'expect' to agree with 'tend to be'.

× For instance, umm, I tend to be a impatient person when when something that I expected to be done soon.

✓ For instance, umm, I tend to be an impatient person when something I expect is to be done soon.

The sentence structure is awkward and incomplete. It needs to be rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× First of all, I do some list to organize something in my head because I need this when when the time.

✓ First of all, I make a list to organize things in my head because I need it when the time comes.

'Do some list' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make a list'. 'Something' should be plural or more general as 'things'. The phrase 'when when the time' is redundant and incomplete; it should be 'when the time comes'.

× I have to listen my, my clients carefully and, and very in a detailed way.

✓ I have to listen to my clients carefully and in a very detailed way.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before the object. Also, 'very in a detailed way' is incorrect; it should be 'in a very detailed way'.

× I try to, uh, find things in a positive ways and I try to, uh, slow down and relax myself because when you, when you are impatient, the things are getting worse and worse.

✓ I try to find things in positive ways and I try to slow down and relax myself because when you are impatient, things get worse and worse.

'In a positive ways' is incorrect; 'ways' is plural so 'a' should be removed. 'The things' is unnecessary; 'things' alone is sufficient. Also, 'are getting' can be simplified to 'get' for clarity.