Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇。

예시: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I can concentrate on tasks for a long time without getting distracted.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当（如'staff'应为'stuff'），表达不清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇并简洁表达观点。

예시: It depends on the task. If something is very complex, I have to be patient because there is no other choice.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，且有重复。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意句子连贯性。

예시: It depends on whether I like the task. If I enjoy it, I can focus for a long time, but if not, I might feel impatient and bored.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不流畅的问题。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和单复数形式。

예시: Yes, as a postgraduate student, I have to conduct experiments daily, often repeating the same process to collect data, so patience is essential.

제안: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰且句子结构混乱。建议使用简单明了的句子，避免重复和错误。

예시: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I used to be easily distracted, but I have improved as I grew older.

× I would say I'm a quite patient, patient person 'cause I can focus on some things for a long time and seldom to be distracted by the surrounding.

✓ I would say I'm quite a patient person because I can focus on some things for a long time and am seldom distracted by the surroundings.

这里“a quite patient, patient person”中“quite”修饰形容词时不需要冠词“a”，且“patient”重复了。应改为“quite a patient person”。另外，“seldom to be distracted”中“to be”多余，应改为“am seldom distracted”。“surrounding”应为复数形式“surroundings”。

× Well, I think it depends on the stuff, the difficulty of the staff.

✓ Well, I think it depends on the stuff, the difficulty of the stuff.

这里“staff”指的是员工，与上下文“stuff”（东西）不符，应改为“stuff”。

× If something is very complex, complex to you have to be patient, you have no choice.

✓ If something is very complex to you, you have to be patient; you have no choice.

句子中“complex”重复，且缺少逗号分隔从句，应改为“complex to you, you have to be patient”。

× If I don't interest in in that, maybe feel a little bit impatient and I think it's very boring.

✓ If I am not interested in that, I may feel a little bit impatient and I think it's very boring.

“interest”应使用被动形式“interested”，且“in”重复出现，应去掉一个。

× every day I have to do experiment, sometimes just in front of computer to repeat the same process to makes it make data.

✓ Every day I have to do experiments, sometimes just in front of the computer to repeat the same process to make data.

“experiment”应为复数“experiments”，“computer”前应加定冠词“the”，动词“makes”应改为“make”。

× So I really need patience.

✓ So I really need patience.

此句无语法错误，无需修改。

× Yes, of course when I was a child I really was curious and very easy to be distracted by the surroundings and always time goes goes on and get older and elder.

✓ Yes, of course when I was a child I was really curious and very easily distracted by the surroundings, and as time went on, I got older and older.

“really was curious”调整为“was really curious”更自然；“very easy to be distracted”应改为“very easily distracted”；“always time goes goes on”重复且语序错误，应改为“as time went on”；“get older and elder”应为“got older and older”。

× Now I I do since.

✓ Now I do.

句子结构不完整且重复“I”，应简化为“Now I do”。