Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid filler words like 'like' and try to provide a brief reason or example to enrich your response.

예시: No, I'm not a very patient person because I tend to get frustrated when things don't happen quickly.

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains hesitations. Try to organize your ideas clearly using linking words and avoid repeating words. Be specific and concise.

예시: I feel impatient when my plans get canceled unexpectedly, and also when I'm stuck in heavy traffic or in crowded places like fairs.

제안: Your answer is a bit long and repetitive. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repeating phrases. Also, use more precise vocabulary to express your feelings.

예시: I get bored and impatient when I have to do the same task for a long time because I like to change activities to keep my mind fresh.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb forms and more natural expressions.

예시: Yes, definitely. My job requires patience because I regularly deal with customers, and staying patient helps me provide better service.

제안: Your answer has some hesitations and repetitive phrases. Try to speak more fluently and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: Although I'm still not very patient, I am more patient now than when I was a child because growing up has taught me to handle situations better.

× Honestly I usually lose my patience like after some time.

✓ Honestly, I usually lose my patience after some time.

The phrase 'like after some time' is informal and unnecessary here. Removing 'like' improves clarity and correctness in present tense usage.

× There are a lot of things which make me impatient such as whenever I plan for something and it got missed that time I got frustrated and lose my patience.

✓ There are a lot of things which make me impatient such as whenever I plan for something and it gets missed, I get frustrated and lose my patience.

The verb 'got missed' should be 'gets missed' to agree with present tense context. Also, 'got frustrated' should be 'get frustrated' to maintain present tense consistency.

× As well as like in the hmm busy schedule, busy traffic jams, jams and other things whenever I go to the fair.

✓ Also, in a busy schedule, busy traffic jams, and other things, whenever I go to the fair,

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. Rephrasing to a complete sentence with present tense and removing filler words improves clarity.

× So like crowd of people make me impa impatient.

✓ So, the crowd of people makes me impatient.

Subject-verb agreement requires 'crowd' (singular) to be followed by 'makes' not 'make'. Also, 'impa impatient' is a typo corrected to 'impatient'.

× I feel quite boring when I have to do something for a long time because I prefer to change things like after some time to rejuvenate my mind and whenever I whenever we are doing the same thing again and again for a long time which make me really impatient and boring so I don't like that.

✓ I feel quite bored when I have to do something for a long time because I prefer to change things after some time to rejuvenate my mind, and whenever we do the same thing again and again for a long time, it makes me really impatient and bored, so I don't like that.

'Feel quite boring' should be 'feel quite bored' because 'boring' describes things, 'bored' describes feelings. Also, verb agreement corrected from 'make' to 'makes' and sentence restructured for clarity.

× I think every job in the universe required the employees to be patiently and it's the same case at my job as well, because we have to handle the customer service and talk to the people regularly.

✓ I think every job in the universe requires employees to be patient, and it's the same case at my job as well, because we have to handle customer service and talk to people regularly.

'Required' should be 'requires' to match present tense. 'Patiently' (adverb) should be 'patient' (adjective) to correctly describe employees. Also, 'the employees' changed to 'employees' for generalization.

× So I think it will be the better if we stay patient while talking to someone else or doing our task at work.

✓ So I think it will be better if we stay patient while talking to someone else or doing our tasks at work.

'The better' is incorrect; 'better' is used without 'the' in this context. 'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to match general meaning.

× As as I mentioned earlier, I am not very patient person, but if you compare me with my, uh, childhood time, I think I am a little bit more patient as compared to that time because as we grow, we learn things at our own pace.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, I am not a very patient person, but if you compare me with my childhood, I think I am a little bit more patient now because as we grow, we learn things at our own pace.

Added missing article 'a' before 'very patient person'. Removed unnecessary filler words and 'childhood time' simplified to 'childhood'. 'Now' added for clarity.

× So I become little patient as compared to that time.

✓ So I have become a little more patient compared to that time.

'Become' should be 'have become' to indicate change over time. Added article 'a' and 'more' for correct comparative form.