Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构不够自然，且有语法错误。建议简化句子，使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复。

예시: I think I am patient in some situations because I try to stay calm and not give up. However, sometimes I get annoyed, which I know is not a good habit.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议明确说明导致不耐烦的具体原因，并使用连词使句子更连贯。

예시: I feel impatient when I face big problems because they make me frustrated. Although I tend to be impatient, I try to be patient in my daily life.

제안: 表达不够流畅，语法和用词错误较多。建议使用更准确的词汇和句型，清晰表达感受和解决方法。

예시: When I have to do something for a long time, I feel frustrated and bored, which makes it hard to continue. However, I try to motivate myself to build confidence and finish the task.

제안: 回答内容较好，但句子结构和用词需要改进。建议简化表达，避免重复，并使用更自然的句子。

예시: I am a student, so I don't have a job. However, when I work on designs or create 3D models for my major, I need to be patient to complete them well.

제안: 回答中有很多语气词和不完整句子，影响表达清晰度。建议练习流利表达，避免使用填充词，并完整表达观点。

예시: Yes, I am definitely more patient now. As a child, I often rushed to finish assignments quickly so I could have free time. But now, I take my time to complete tasks carefully.

× Sometimes I felt I am a patient person, I will make myself calm down and to not give up to do something.

✓ Sometimes I feel I am a patient person, I will make myself calm down and not give up doing something.

这里时态不一致，前半句用过去时felt，后半句用现在时态，应该统一用现在时feel，因为描述的是一般情况。

× I will make myself calm down and to not give up to do something.

✓ I will make myself calm down and not give up doing something.

动词短语中“give up”后应接动名词形式doing，而不是不定式to do。

× Sometimes I will say some bigger problem and I will feel very frustrated at the time.

✓ Sometimes I will face some bigger problems and I will feel very frustrated at the time.

“say some bigger problem”表达不当，应使用“face some bigger problems”表示遇到更大的问题。

× I always an impatient person, but I know that it is not a good habit, so I will still patient in my daily life.

✓ I am always an impatient person, but I know that it is not a good habit, so I will still be patient in my daily life.

缺少动词“am”，且“still patient”应为“still be patient”，需要动词be。

× When I do something during a long time, I will feel frustrated and boring, so I can't encourage continue to do it.

✓ When I do something for a long time, I will feel frustrated and bored, so I can't encourage myself to continue doing it.

“during a long time”应改为“for a long time”；“boring”形容事物，描述人的感受应用“bored”；“encourage continue to do it”结构错误，应为“encourage myself to continue doing it”。

× So at next time I will encourage us to boost myself confidence to finish it.

✓ So next time I will encourage myself to boost my confidence to finish it.

“encourage us”应为“encourage myself”，主语是第一人称单数；“myself confidence”应为“my confidence”。

× At that time I must be a patient, I must be a patient person to serve it.

✓ At that time I must be patient, I must be a patient person to do it.

“be a patient”错误，形容词“patient”不加冠词；“serve it”用词不当，应为“do it”或“complete it”。

× When I was a child, I always, uh, be a, uh, an actions for success, uh, to finish some assignment and uh, get a lot of time to do other things.

✓ When I was a child, I always took actions to succeed, to finish some assignments and get a lot of time to do other things.

“be a an actions”结构错误，且时态应为过去时“took actions”；“assignment”应为复数“assignments”。

× But now I'll always be patient to finish a lot of.

✓ But now I'll always be patient to finish a lot of work.

句子不完整，“finish a lot of”后应有名词补充完整句意。