Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为直接，但表达稍显重复，建议避免冗余，使用更自然流畅的表达方式。

예시: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I remain calm and respond kindly even when people ask me the same questions multiple times.

제안: 回答内容不够具体，缺少具体情境或原因，建议提供具体例子并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Usually, I feel impatient when I have to wait in long queues; however, I try to stay calm by reminding myself that waiting is sometimes unavoidable.

제안: 回答结构较好，但用词和句式可以更自然，建议使用更丰富的词汇和连接词。

예시: At first, I might feel a bit bored and impatient when doing something for a long time; however, I usually find interesting aspects that motivate me to keep going.

제안: 回答内容有些模糊，建议明确说明工作内容与耐心的关系，并使用更准确的词汇。

예시: Yes, my job requires patience because I often help people who feel anxious about their short-term results, and I encourage them to focus on long-term progress.

제안: 语法错误影响表达（如“can waiting”应为“can wait”），建议注意语法准确性并丰富细节。

예시: Definitely, I am more patient now than when I was a child; back then, I could only wait for about half an hour before feeling anxious, but now I can wait for results patiently for over a week.

× I may feel a little bit boring and impatient at first, but after that I will find something interesting when doing such things and this can encourage me to continue.

✓ I may feel a little bit bored and impatient at first, but after that I will find something interesting when doing such things and this can encourage me to continue.

这里的 'boring' 是形容词，表示使人感到无聊的，而句中想表达的是自己的感受，应该用过去分词 'bored'，表示感到无聊。

× but now I can waiting for the results for more than a week.

✓ but now I can wait for the results for more than a week.

情态动词 'can' 后面应接动词原形，不能接动名词 'waiting'，因此应改为 'wait'。