Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且有重复词汇。建议简化句子结构，注意时态和冠词的使用，避免重复。

예시: I think I am patient in studying because I believe persistence leads to success. However, I get impatient when flights are delayed for a long time.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且内容重复。建议使用更准确的词汇，注意单复数和冠词，避免重复表达。

예시: I feel impatient when talking to children because some are spoiled and cry often, which causes delays. Also, delayed flights make me feel impatient.

제안: 回答中有多处语法错误和用词不当，表达不连贯。建议简化句子，注意动词形式和词汇搭配，避免无意义词汇。

예시: It depends. I am patient when studying because I believe persistence leads to success. But I feel anxious and impatient when waiting for delayed flights.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够简洁自然。建议注意主谓一致，简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达。

예시: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because I have to sit in front of the screen and complete repetitive tasks. Without patience, I would feel anxious and bored.

제안: 回答中表达不够清晰，有语法和用词错误。建议注意时态和句子结构，避免重复，表达更自然。

예시: I am more patient now than when I was a child. For example, I used to get angry over small things like not eating my favorite food, but now I can wait calmly without feeling uncomfortable.

× I'm very patient when overcome the difficulties I face in the study life.

✓ I'm very patient when overcoming the difficulties I face in study life.

动词后面接动名词形式（-ing）表示正在进行的动作，句中缺少动名词形式，应该用overcoming。

× when I when I met a delayed flight, I will be impatient for a long time waiting.

✓ when I meet a delayed flight, I will be impatient for a long time waiting.

描述习惯或将来情况时，条件从句用一般现在时，不能用过去时met，应改为meet。

× I'm not very a patient people when I communicate with the child because some child are spoiled and they often stream which makes me feel anxiety and unexpected delays.

✓ I'm not a very patient person when I communicate with children because some children are spoiled and they often scream which makes me feel anxious and causes unexpected delays.

people是复数，前面用a不合适，应使用person。child复数应为children。stream应为scream。anxiety是名词，形容词应为anxious。

× some child are spoiled and they often stream which makes me feel anxiety and unexpected delays.

✓ some children are spoiled and they often scream which makes me feel anxious and causes unexpected delays.

child复数形式是children，stream应为scream。

× which makes me feel anxiety and unexpected delays.

✓ which makes me feel anxious and causes unexpected delays.

anxiety是名词，形容词应为anxious。unexpected delays是名词短语，前面应加动词causes。

× I'll be very patient when I dealing with the difficulties I faced in the studies because I believe the persistence lead to success.

✓ I'll be very patient when I am dealing with the difficulties I face in my studies because I believe persistence leads to success.

动词后应使用现在分词形式dealing，且主谓一致，lead应为leads。

× I'll be very patient when I dealing with the difficulties I faced in the studies because I believe the persistence lead to success.

✓ I'll be very patient when I am dealing with the difficulties I face in my studies because I believe persistence leads to success.

描述习惯时，face用一般现在时，faced是过去时，不合适。

× the delay flights are very impatient and anxiety and in ancient.

✓ the delayed flights make me very impatient and anxious and irritated.

flight复数应为flights，delayed是形容词。anxiety是名词，形容词应为anxious。in ancient不合适，应改为irritated或类似表达。

× my job require lots of patience because you need to sit in front of the screen for a long time and to do the simple and complete things for a long time.

✓ my job requires lots of patience because you need to sit in front of the screen for a long time and do simple and complete tasks for a long time.

job是单数，谓语动词应加s，require改为requires。things改为tasks更合适。

× If you don't be patient, you will feel anxious and bored.

✓ If you are not patient, you will feel anxious and bored.

情态动词后接动词原形，don't be不正确，应改为are not。

× I'm more patient now than the past.

✓ I'm more patient now than in the past.

比较时应加介词in，表示时间段。

× when I was a child I could be impatient and angry with small things, like I don't eat something I like.

✓ when I was a child I could be impatient and angry with small things, like not eating something I liked.

描述过去习惯时，动词应使用过去式liked，且表达更自然。

× now I can't wait a long time and don't feel anything uncomfortable.

✓ now I can wait a long time and don't feel anything uncomfortable.

can't wait表示不能等待，与上下文意思不符，应改为can wait。

× don't feel anything uncomfortable.

✓ don't feel anything uncomfortable.

此句语法正确，但更自然表达为don't feel uncomfortable。