Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答很有趣且自然，但有些语法错误和表达不够准确，比如“wait people”应为“wait for people”。建议注意介词的使用，并且回答可以更直接，避免过多的比喻使表达不够清晰。

예시: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I can wait calmly in most situations. However, I sometimes get impatient when technology doesn't work properly, like when my phone freezes.

제안: 你的回答表达了原因，但句子结构较复杂且有些冗长。建议使用更简洁的句子，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I feel impatient when people around me are impatient because their anxiety affects me. This makes me feel frustrated and disappointed.

제안: 你的回答生动有趣，内容具体，但句子较长且有些口语化。建议适当简化句子结构，保持正式和自然的表达。

예시: It depends on the activity. For example, I can watch TV shows for hours without getting tired, but when I have to work for a long time, I often need breaks and some motivation to keep going.

제안: 你的回答内容具体且有趣，但表达中有些夸张的比喻可能不够正式。建议用更正式的语言表达情绪，同时保持内容的丰富性。

예시: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience, especially when my boss gives unclear instructions and frequently changes decisions. I have to stay calm and redo tasks multiple times.

제안: 你的回答有趣但表达不够清晰，部分句子语法错误且含义模糊。建议使用更明确的句子结构，避免使用不常见或不恰当的词汇。

예시: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. My supervisor taught me to be patient by giving vague answers, which made me learn to wait without asking too many questions.

× I can wait people for a long time, but the moment the loading bar shows up I'm already tapping the screen like it owes me money.

✓ I can wait for people for a long time, but the moment the loading bar shows up I'm already tapping the screen like it owes me money.

这里缺少介词“for”，正确表达是“wait for people”，表示“等待某人”。

× I can wait people for a long time, but the moment the loading bar shows up I'm already tapping the screen like it owes me money.

✓ I can wait for people for a long time, but the moment the loading bar shows up I'm already tapping the screen like it owes me money.

动词“wait”后面需要加介词“for”来引出等待的对象。

× When the person around me shows the feeling of impatience, I will feel impatient as well because I think this sense of anxiety can convey to me easily, which makes me feel frustrated and disappointed.

✓ When the person around me shows feelings of impatience, I will feel impatient as well because I think this sense of anxiety can be conveyed to me easily, which makes me feel frustrated and disappointed.

“shows the feeling”应改为“shows feelings”，且“convey to me”应改为被动语态“can be conveyed to me”，更符合英语表达习惯。

× When the person around me shows the feeling of impatience, I will feel impatient as well because I think this sense of anxiety can convey to me easily, which makes me feel frustrated and disappointed.

✓ When the person around me shows feelings of impatience, I will feel impatient as well because I think this sense of anxiety can be conveyed to me easily, which makes me feel frustrated and disappointed.

“feeling”应为复数“feelings”，表示多种感受。

× When the person around me shows the feeling of impatience, I will feel impatient as well because I think this sense of anxiety can convey to me easily, which makes me feel frustrated and disappointed.

✓ When the person around me shows feelings of impatience, I will feel impatient as well because I think this sense of anxiety can be conveyed to me easily, which makes me feel frustrated and disappointed.

“convey to me”应使用被动语态“can be conveyed to me”，表示“这种焦虑感可以被传达给我”。

× It depends, if it's binge watching trashy dramas I have Olympic level stamina but if it's doing actual work I suddenly need snacks, bathroom breaks, emotional support, and maybe a quick nap to survive the trauma of responsibility.

✓ It depends, if it's binge-watching trashy dramas I have Olympic-level stamina but if it's doing actual work I suddenly need snacks, bathroom breaks, emotional support, and maybe a quick nap to survive the trauma of responsibility.

“binge watching”应连写为复合动词“binge-watching”，“Olympic level”应加连字符变为形容词短语“Olympic-level”。

× It depends, if it's binge watching trashy dramas I have Olympic level stamina but if it's doing actual work I suddenly need snacks, bathroom breaks, emotional support, and maybe a quick nap to survive the trauma of responsibility.

✓ It depends, if it's binge-watching trashy dramas I have Olympic-level stamina but if it's doing actual work I suddenly need snacks, bathroom breaks, emotional support, and maybe a quick nap to survive the trauma of responsibility.

复合形容词修饰名词时应使用连字符连接，如“Olympic-level stamina”。

× Yes, especially when my boss gives vague instructions and changes their mind every 5 minutes. I just sit there redoing everything, acting calm on the outside but mentally riding my resignation letter.

✓ Yes, especially when my boss gives vague instructions and changes his or her mind every 5 minutes. I just sit there redoing everything, acting calm on the outside but mentally riding my resignation letter.

“boss”是单数，代词应使用“his or her”而非复数“their”，以保持主谓一致。

× Yes, especially when my boss gives vague instructions and changes their mind every 5 minutes. I just sit there redoing everything, acting calm on the outside but mentally riding my resignation letter.

✓ Yes, especially when my boss gives vague instructions and changes his or her mind every 5 minutes. I just sit there redoing everything, acting calm on the outside but mentally riding my resignation letter.

单数名词“boss”对应的代词应为“his or her”，避免使用复数“their”。

× Yes, all thanks to my supervisor. Every time I ask how long will this take, she just smiled and said yes. After that I stopped asking gruesome patience and developed a deep fear of vague answers.

✓ Yes, all thanks to my supervisor. Every time I ask how long this will take, she just smiled and said yes. After that I stopped asking gruesome patience and developed a deep fear of vague answers.

间接疑问句中语序应为陈述语序，“how long this will take”而非“how long will this take”。

× Yes, all thanks to my supervisor. Every time I ask how long will this take, she just smiled and said yes. After that I stopped asking gruesome patience and developed a deep fear of vague answers.

✓ Yes, all thanks to my supervisor. Every time I ask how long this will take, she just smiled and said yes. After that I stopped asking for gruesome patience and developed a deep fear of vague answers.

“ask”后面需要加介词“for”来引出请求的内容，正确表达为“ask for gruesome patience”。

× Yes, all thanks to my supervisor. Every time I ask how long will this take, she just smiled and said yes. After that I stopped asking gruesome patience and developed a deep fear of vague answers.

✓ Yes, all thanks to my supervisor. Every time I ask how long this will take, she just smiled and said yes. After that I stopped asking for gruesome patience and developed a deep fear of vague answers.

“gruesome patience”表达不当，可能想表达“痛苦的耐心”，但此处用词不准确，建议改为更合适的表达。