Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构不够自然，且有语法错误。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用更准确的词汇表达耐心的不同情境。

예시: I consider myself patient when taking care of children, but I get impatient in situations beyond my control, like waiting for a delayed plane.

제안: 回答中语法和表达混乱，影响理解。建议使用简单清晰的句子，直接说明让你不耐烦的具体情况，并用连接词使表达连贯。

예시: I feel impatient when I have to explain important details repeatedly because the other person doesn't understand me.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但语法错误较多，句子不够流畅。建议注意时态和词汇使用，明确表达不同情况下的耐心程度。

예시: It depends on the task. I am patient when doing things I enjoy, but I struggle with tasks outside my expertise.

제안: 回答中断且语法错误较多，表达不完整。建议简洁明了地回答问题，使用正确的语法和词汇，避免重复。

예시: Yes, my job requires patience because it helps maintain a positive work environment.

제안: 回答中语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议用简单句子说明现在比小时候更有耐心，并解释原因。

예시: Definitely yes. I was often angry as a child because I was still growing and learning to control my emotions.

× If I am asked to take care of our children, I think I am very patient, but I am not a patient man if I met the controlled things like waiting for a delayed plane.

✓ If I am asked to take care of our children, I think I am very patient, but I am not a patient man if I meet controlled things like waiting for a delayed plane.

这里的动词时态应与条件句保持一致，使用一般现在时'meet'而不是过去时'met'。因为条件句描述的是一种习惯或一般情况。

× In when I express something important thing and convey something detail to a person who all is don't get you what you are talking about and you should repeat it again and again.

✓ When I express something important and convey some details to a person who doesn't understand what I am talking about and I have to repeat it again and again.

原句结构混乱，存在多余词汇和语法错误。应简化句子结构，使用正确的关系代词和动词形式，使句子通顺。

× In when I express something important thing and convey something detail to a person who all is don't get you what you are talking about and you should repeat it again and again.

✓ When I express something important and convey some details to a person who doesn't understand what I am talking about and I have to repeat it again and again.

原句中'who all is don't get you'的代词和动词搭配错误，应使用'who doesn't understand you'或简化为'who doesn't understand'。

× But if doing something I am not in my specialist, I think I don't have enough capability to it.

✓ But if I am doing something I am not specialized in, I think I don't have enough capability to do it.

缺少主语'I'，'specialist'用法错误，应为形容词'specialized'，且动词不定式'do'缺失。

× But if doing something I am not in my specialist, I think I don't have enough capability to it.

✓ But if I am doing something I am not specialized in, I think I don't have enough capability to do it.

介词'in'使用错误，'specialist'应改为形容词形式'specialized'，并且动词不定式'do'缺失。

× I. I think not only for my job, I think all of the job need to be patient because patient is essential for maintaining the positive work atmosphere which can lead to positive.

✓ I think not only my job, but all jobs need patience because patience is essential for maintaining a positive work atmosphere which can lead to positive outcomes.

句子结构不完整且重复，缺少连词，名词单复数错误，且表达不完整。应调整句子结构，使其完整且通顺。

× I think not only for my job, I think all of the job need to be patient because patient is essential for maintaining the positive work atmosphere which can lead to positive.

✓ I think not only my job, but all jobs need patience because patience is essential for maintaining a positive work atmosphere which can lead to positive outcomes.

'job'应使用复数形式'jobs'，'patient'应为名词'patience'，以符合语境。

× Definitely yes. When I was a kid, I'm always angry.

✓ Definitely yes. When I was a kid, I was always angry.

描述过去的习惯动作时，应使用过去时态，'I'm'应改为'was'。

× I think that is because our brain is not develop completely so but we are pushing now.

✓ I think that is because our brain is not developed completely, but we are growing now.

'develop'应为过去分词'developed'作形容词用，'pushing'用词不当，应改为'growing'表示成长。

× I think that is because our brain is not develop completely so but we are pushing now.

✓ I think that is because our brain is not developed completely, but we are growing now.

句子中' so but'连用不合适，应使用'but'连接两个对比的分句，句子更通顺。