Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点并给出了例子，但有些语法错误和用词不当，如“a organized way”应为“an organized way”。建议注意冠词的使用，并尝试使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I believe I am a patient person because I can stay calm when facing stressful situations. For instance, I often have to manage multiple deadlines and projects, but I always handle them in an organized way, which helps me stay composed.

제안: 回答内容具体且有例子支持，但句子结构稍显重复，且“makes me feel impatient”应为“make me feel impatient”。建议注意主谓一致，并尝试使用更多连接词提升表达的连贯性。

예시: Well, I feel impatient when people are indecisive, especially during crucial decision-making. Their hesitation often delays our important plans and schedules, which makes me quite frustrated.

제안: 回答结构清晰，但表达略显重复且部分句子不够自然，如“feel focused on our accomplishment”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意时态一致。

예시: When I have to do something for a long time, I usually experience two stages. At first, I feel anxious because I worry about not finishing on time or doing it perfectly. However, after making detailed plans and schedules, I become more focused and motivated to complete the task successfully.

제안: 回答内容相关，但有语法错误，如“for student”应为“for students”，句子结尾不完整。建议注意复数形式和句子完整性，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Well, I am a student, and I think it is essential for students to be patient because mastering a subject takes time. Therefore, to make steady and consistent progress, we need to keep reading and thinking carefully.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误，如“much patient”应为“much more patient”，“manage my emotion”应为“manage my emotions”。建议加强语法准确性，并使用更自然的表达。

예시: Yes, I think I am much more patient now than before because I have learned how to manage my emotions. For example, I understand that it is always worthwhile to wait for good things to happen, so I stay focused and organized to achieve my goals.

× I am always busy with different kinds of deadlines, projects, and assets, but I can always deal with them in a organized way.

✓ I am always busy with different kinds of deadlines, projects, and tasks, but I can always deal with them in an organized way.

这里“assets”用词不当，应该用“tasks”表示任务；另外，“a organized way”中冠词使用错误，应该用“an”因为organized以元音音素开头。

× it is the indecisive people that makes me feel impatient

✓ it is the indecisive people that make me feel impatient

“people”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“make”，而不是“makes”。

× we sometimes have to delay our important plans and schedules and it will make me feel frustrated.

✓ we sometimes have to delay our important plans and schedules, and it makes me feel frustrated.

这里“it will make me feel frustrated”时态不合适，描述习惯性事实应使用一般现在时“it makes me feel frustrated”。

× Well, I will go through 2 stages.

✓ Well, I will go through two stages.

数字“2”在正式写作中应写成单词形式“two”。

× But I will make detailed plans and schedules and after that I will feel focused on our accomplishment if I finished it on time.

✓ But I will make detailed plans and schedules, and after that I will feel focused on our accomplishment if I finish it on time.

条件句中应使用一般现在时“if I finish”，而不是过去式“finished”。

× I think it is also essential for student to be patient because it will take us a long time to master a certain subject.

✓ I think it is also essential for students to be patient because it will take us a long time to master a certain subject.

“student”应为复数形式“students”，因为泛指所有学生。

× So if we want to make steady and consistent progress, we need to keep reading, thinking.

✓ So if we want to make steady and consistent progress, we need to keep reading and thinking.

“reading, thinking”之间缺少连词“and”，导致句子结构不完整。

× Yes, I think I'm much patient than before because I know how to manage my emotion.

✓ Yes, I think I'm much more patient than before because I know how to manage my emotions.

“patient”前应加比较级“more”；“emotion”应为复数“emotions”，表示情绪的多样性。