Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和拼写错误，表达不够清晰，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用正确的语法和词汇。

예시: To be honest, I am not a patient person. For example, when my friend procrastinates and is late for our meetings, I feel quite frustrated.

제안: 回答结构混乱，语法错误较多，建议直接回答问题并用连贯的句子说明原因。

예시: I feel impatient because my parents are not very patient, and their behavior has influenced me a lot.

제안: 表达较为清楚，但有语法错误和重复，建议简洁表达并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: When I have to do something for a long time, I often lose focus and feel impatient, although I know I should practice to improve.

제안: 回答中断断续续，语法和表达不准确，建议用完整句子清晰表达职业和耐心的关系。

예시: Yes, I am currently studying for my postgraduate degree to become a dentist, and this job requires a lot of patience, although sometimes I find it challenging.

제안: 回答中有许多拼写和语法错误，表达不清晰，建议用简单明了的句子表达观点和未来计划。

예시: Absolutely yes, I have improved my patience over time, and I will continue to practice and try my best to be more patient in the future.

× my friend is a procastinate an every time when she laid for our dating our feel angry

✓ my friend is a procrastinator and every time when she is late for our date, I feel angry

这里“procastinate”是动词，应该用名词形式“procrastinator”来表示“拖延者”；“an”用错了，应该是“a”；“laid”是过去式，应该用“is late”表示现在状态；“dating”用错，应该是“date”；“our feel angry”结构错误，应该是“I feel angry”。这些都是单复数和词性错误。

× My parents. Who is in a patient person?

✓ My parents, who are patient people.

“Who is”用于单数，但“parents”是复数，应该用“who are”；“in a patient person”结构错误，应该是“patient people”。这是代词和数的一致性错误。

× So I think that's bring a great influence to me.

✓ So I think that brings a great influence on me.

“that's”是“that is”的缩写，主语是单数，谓语动词应为第三人称单数形式“brings”；“bring”是原形动词，错误。

× I will lack for lack of patience to do this even though I know I should practice my skills about it.

✓ I will lack patience to do this even though I know I should practice my skills at it.

“lack”后不需要介词“for”；“practice my skills about it”中“about”用错，应该用“at”表示“在某方面练习”。

× my job acquire me to be patient to patient but most of time I cannot.

✓ my job requires me to be patient, but most of the time I cannot.

“acquire me”错误，应该是“requires me”；“to patient”应为“to be patient”；“most of time”缺少定冠词“the”。

× Absolutely yes I expanded my repti of these kind of ability and skill an on on my volition Ann I will keep to practice and try my best to do it better in future.

✓ Absolutely yes, I have expanded my repertoire of these kinds of abilities and skills on my own volition, and I will keep practicing and try my best to do better in the future.

“repti”应为“repertoire”；“these kind of ability and skill”应为“these kinds of abilities and skills”，名词和数量不一致；“an on on my volition Ann”应为“on my own volition”；“keep to practice”应为“keep practicing”；“do it better in future”应为“do better in the future”。这些都是单复数、词形和搭配错误。