Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer should be more natural and directly address the question. Avoid referring to yourself in the third person and try to use correct grammar. Also, keep your answer concise and clear.

예시: Yes, I am a very patient person because I usually stay calm and relaxed throughout the day.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question by stating what makes you feel impatient, and provide specific reasons with correct grammar and vocabulary.

예시: I feel impatient when I have to wait in long queues, especially when I am eager to buy new clothes because I am very keen on fashion.

제안: Your answer is confusing and does not directly address the question. Avoid irrelevant phrases and focus on expressing your feelings clearly with proper sentence structure.

예시: When I have to do something for a long time, I feel relaxed and focused, as I am a patient person.

제안: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use simpler and clearer sentences to express your ideas, and directly relate your job to the need for patience.

예시: In my opinion, every job requires some patience. My current job also needs me to be quite patient.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains informal or inappropriate expressions. Use polite and clear language to compare your current patience with your childhood.

예시: To be honest, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned to control my emotions better.

× He is of course I am very patient person as I usually stay calm and relaxed all the day.

✓ Of course, I am a very patient person as I usually stay calm and relaxed all day.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'He is' instead of 'I am' to refer to oneself. Also, 'all the day' should be 'all day'. The pronoun should match the speaker, and the article 'a' is needed before 'very patient person'.

× Well the very first thing which keeping me on patient is shaping the clothes as I am very keen to buy new clothes and I usually lose my patient when I seen you fashion sense.

✓ Well, the very first thing that keeps me patient is shopping for clothes as I am very keen to buy new clothes and I usually lose my patience when I see your fashion sense.

The sentence has several errors: 'which keeping me on patient' should be 'that keeps me patient' (subject-verb agreement and correct relative pronoun), 'shaping the clothes' should be 'shopping for clothes' (word choice), 'lose my patient' should be 'lose my patience' (correct noun), and 'when I seen you fashion sense' should be 'when I see your fashion sense' (correct verb tense and possessive pronoun).

× What is a idea mentioned? I am very patient person so I feel very relaxed and concentrated on a particulare talks which are young performing.

✓ What is the idea mentioned? I am a very patient person, so I feel very relaxed and concentrate on particular talks which I am performing.

The sentence has errors in article usage ('a idea' should be 'the idea'), missing articles ('a very patient person'), incorrect adjective spelling ('particulare' to 'particular'), and incorrect verb forms ('concentrated' should be 'concentrate' to match present tense, and 'which are young performing' is unclear and corrected to 'which I am performing').

× According to my introspective, each and every job required a particular level of patient. However, of course here the job which I am doing little lot of patient too.

✓ According to my introspection, each and every job requires a particular level of patience. However, of course, the job I am doing requires a lot of patience too.

Errors include incorrect noun form 'introspective' instead of 'introspection', verb tense agreement ('required' to 'requires'), incorrect noun 'patient' instead of 'patience', and awkward phrasing 'little lot of patient' corrected to 'a lot of patience'.

× To be very honest I am very well maintained and patient person as compared to my childhood as I was very messed up child in my early ages.

✓ To be very honest, I am a well-maintained and patient person compared to my childhood, as I was a very messed-up child in my early years.

Errors include missing articles ('a patient person'), incorrect phrase 'well maintained' which should be hyphenated as 'well-maintained', awkward phrase 'as compared to my childhood' simplified to 'compared to my childhood', and 'early ages' corrected to 'early years'.