Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议注意时态和句子结构的正确使用，同时避免冗余表达。可以用更简洁自然的句子表达观点，并补充具体细节。

예시: I am not very patient because I get frustrated when I have to repeat myself. For example, if someone asks me the same question twice, I feel annoyed. However, I am trying to improve my patience because I know it is important.

제안: 回答内容较为重复，且语法和表达不够准确。建议使用连词使句子更连贯，并提供更具体的例子来丰富内容。

예시: I feel impatient when I have to repeat myself multiple times. For instance, when communicating with colleagues who don't understand me, I have to explain repeatedly, which wastes time and makes me frustrated.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，注意单词拼写和语法，同时提供更具体的细节。

예시: I feel frustrated and impatient when I have to focus on one task for a long time because it wastes my valuable time. For example, I may have other tasks to do, but spending too much time on one makes me annoyed.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰，部分词汇使用不当。建议使用正确的词汇和句子结构，避免无意义的表达，并举例说明耐心的重要性。

예시: I believe every job requires patience because people have different personalities. For example, understanding colleagues' views takes time, but patience helps us cooperate better and work efficiently.

제안: 回答较为完整，但存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题。建议注意冠词和名词单复数的使用，并用更自然的表达方式。

예시: I was an impatient child and didn't realize it. Now, I understand the importance of being patient, especially when communicating and trying to see things from others' perspectives. This helps build better relationships.

× I tend to get angry very easily in, specially when I have to repeat myself more than once.

✓ I tend to get angry very easily, especially when I have to repeat myself more than once.

这里的'in'是多余的，且'specially'应为副词形式'especially'，表示特别。

× However, I aware of this is not a good personality.

✓ However, I am aware that this is not a good personality trait.

缺少be动词'am'，且表达应为'aware that'，表示意识到某事。

× I trying to be more patient than come in.

✓ I am trying to be more patient than before.

缺少be动词'am'，'trying'需要与主语连用。'than come in'表达不清，应为'than before'表示比以前。

× For example is someone asked me the same question twice, I might feel a little bit frustrated.

✓ For example, if someone asks me the same question twice, I might feel a little bit frustrated.

缺少条件连词'if'，动词时态应为一般现在时'asks'，表示习惯性动作。

× I think what makes me feel impatient the most is I have to repeat myself many times.

✓ I think what makes me feel impatient the most is having to repeat myself many times.

'is'后应接动名词短语，表示持续的动作。

× a communicating with my colleague and they cannot understand what I'm trying to say.

✓ communicating with my colleagues and they cannot understand what I'm trying to say.

'a'多余，'colleague'应为复数形式'colleagues'，因为后文用复数代词'they'。

× I feel a little frustrated in that situation this waste our time.

✓ I feel a little frustrated in that situation because this wastes our time.

缺少连词'because'，动词'waste'应加第三人称单数形式's'，与主语'this'一致。

× When I have to focus on one since for a long time I feel a little bit frustrated and impatient becauses it waste my valuable time and make whole progressed very efficiently.

✓ When I have to focus on one thing for a long time, I feel a little bit frustrated and impatient because it wastes my valuable time and makes the whole process less efficient.

'since'应为'thing'，'becauses'拼写错误为'because'，动词'waste'和'make'需加第三人称单数's'，'progressed'应为'noun process'，并且表达应为'less efficient'。

× For example, I still have other things to do, but spending too much time now once in make me feel annoyed.

✓ For example, I still have other things to do, but spending too much time on one task makes me feel annoyed.

'now once in'表达错误，应为'on one task'，动词'make'需加第三人称单数's'。

× I think every job requires to be patient because people in the workplace have different personalities and ways of thinking.

✓ I think every job requires you to be patient because people in the workplace have different personalities and ways of thinking.

动词'require'后应接宾语'to be patient'，缺少宾语。

× but this patient helps us come in the cake batter and work more efficiently.

✓ but this patience helps us come together and work more efficiently.

'patient'是形容词，应使用名词'patience'，'come in the cake batter'表达错误，应为'come together'。

× ISA team in the next time we cooperate.

✓ I hope next time we cooperate as a team.

句子结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，'ISA team'应为'I hope'，表达愿望。

× I was quite an impatient child and didn't really realize it at that time.

✓ I was quite an impatient child and didn't really realize it at that time.

此句时态正确，无需修改。

× However, now I'm older I understand important of being more patient especially when communicating with other people and trying to understand their person perspective.

✓ However, now I'm older, I understand the importance of being more patient, especially when communicating with other people and trying to understand their personal perspective.

缺少定冠词'the'，'important'应为名词形式'importance'，'person perspective'应为'personal perspective'。

× This help us build better relationship.

✓ This helps us build better relationships.

动词'help'需加第三人称单数's'，'relationship'应为复数形式'relationships'。