Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then support it with specific examples. Avoid fragmented sentences and unclear words. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: I think I am sometimes patient, but during very busy times, I tend to lose my patience because I have too many tasks to handle.

제안: Provide a clear topic sentence and explain your reasons with complete sentences. Use linking words like 'because' or 'when' to connect ideas logically.

예시: I feel impatient when I have to do difficult tasks, especially if my partner does not agree with my opinion, which makes communication hard.

제안: Answer directly and clearly. Use correct grammar and vocabulary. Explain your feelings with specific examples and use linking words like 'however' or 'but'.

예시: It depends on the situation. When I do something I am interested in, I am patient and focused. However, if the task is boring, I become impatient and find it hard to concentrate.

제안: Speak clearly and use correct sentence structures. Provide specific details about your job and explain why patience is important. Avoid unclear phrases.

예시: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because I have to interact with many customers and help them solve different problems calmly.

제안: Answer the question directly and clearly. Use complete sentences and explain how you have changed with specific reasons. Use linking words to organize your ideas.

예시: I believe I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned to stay calm and confident when facing challenges and to carefully analyze the advantages and disadvantages before reacting.

× Well. Tassel, tough question, I think.

✓ Well, tassel, that's a tough question, I think.

The original sentence lacks proper sentence structure and punctuation. Adding 'that's' clarifies the subject and verb, and commas improve readability.

× Sometimes I'm impatient, but.

✓ Sometimes I'm impatient, though.

The original sentence ends abruptly with 'but' without completing the thought. Replacing 'but' with 'though' completes the sentence properly.

× In some. Very, very busy time I was.

✓ At some very, very busy times, I was not patient.

The original sentence fragments and misplaces words. Correcting the preposition and word order forms a complete and clear sentence.

× No patience.

✓ I had no patience.

The phrase lacks a subject and verb. Adding 'I had' completes the sentence and clarifies meaning.

× I think is a hard difficult task.

✓ I think it is a hard, difficult task.

The sentence is missing the subject 'it' and a comma between adjectives for clarity.

× And the partner? Not. Adapt my. Opinion.

✓ And the partner does not adapt to my opinion.

The original is fragmented and lacks proper verb forms and prepositions. Correcting verb usage and adding prepositions improves clarity.

× So I think when we talk is so hard.

✓ So I think when we talk, it is very hard.

The sentence lacks a subject for 'is' and needs a comma for clarity.

× Is OB to the situation when I do something I interested, I will I will be patience and concentration.

✓ It depends on the situation; when I do something I am interested in, I will be patient and concentrate.

The original sentence misuses 'Is OB' and lacks proper verb forms and prepositions. Correcting these forms a coherent sentence.

× But when I do something I feel boring, I would not impatience and I can't concentrate my vocals.

✓ But when I do something I find boring, I become impatient and can't concentrate on my vocals.

The original misuses 'feel boring' instead of 'find boring', uses 'would not impatience' incorrectly, and misplaces 'concentrate my vocals'. Correcting these improves meaning.

× Yeah, you know we needs.

✓ Yeah, you know we need.

The verb 'needs' is incorrect for the plural subject 'we'. It should be 'need'.

× We need get along way to customers and we need to deal manning different problem.

✓ We need to get along well with customers and deal with many different problems.

The original sentence lacks prepositions and uses incorrect words ('manning' instead of 'many'). Correcting these improves clarity.

× We need to give them the muscles to solve problem and winning become impatience.

✓ We need to give them the tools to solve problems and avoid becoming impatient.

The original misuses 'muscles' instead of 'tools', lacks plural for 'problem', and uses 'winning become impatience' incorrectly. Correcting these clarifies meaning.

× I believe that's come up.

✓ I believe that's grown up.

The phrase 'come up' is incorrect in this context; 'grown up' better expresses maturity.

× Mash troll people.

✓ Most people.

The phrase 'Mash troll people' is a mishearing or typo; 'Most people' is the correct phrase.

× You need to be calm and confident when you faced challenges or obstacles.

✓ You need to be calm and confident when you face challenges or obstacles.

The verb tense should be present tense 'face' to match 'need to be'.

× You need to. Analyze. The advantage and disadvantage.

✓ You need to analyze the advantages and disadvantages.

The original sentence is fragmented and uses singular forms where plural is appropriate. Correcting these forms a complete sentence.