Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语句不够连贯，存在语法错误和重复，建议简化表达，避免断句不完整，使用更自然的句式。

예시: I'm not very patient, but I always remind myself that patience is important in life.

제안: 回答中断句不完整，语法错误较多，建议使用完整句子表达观点，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: I don't often feel impatient, but when someone doesn't understand me and continues to do what I dislike, I get frustrated.

제안: 表达混乱且重复，语法错误明显，建议用简洁连贯的句子表达感受，避免口语化的填充词。

예시: I don't usually feel impatient, but when I have to do something for a long time, I feel like giving up because it becomes tiring.

제안: 回答内容相关但表达不够准确，存在语法和用词错误，建议使用正确的词汇和句式，表达更清晰。

예시: Definitely. Since I am studying law and want to be a lawyer, I need to be patient with my clients and listen carefully to them.

제안: 回答语句不完整且含糊，语法错误严重，建议理清思路，使用完整句子表达对比和原因。

예시: I think I was more patient as a child because I had fewer responsibilities and didn't have to worry about many things.

× Well, to be honest, I'm not a patient person, but.

✓ Well, to be honest, I'm not a patient person.

句子末尾的“but”没有后续内容，导致句子结构不完整。应去掉“but”使句子完整。

× Sometimes I always tell myself you have to be patient because.

✓ Sometimes I always tell myself that you have to be patient because.

缺少连接词“that”使句子不完整，添加“that”连接主句和宾语从句。

× Patient is the key in your life.

✓ Patience is the key in your life.

“Patient”是形容词，表示“有耐心的”，此处应使用名词“Patience”表示“耐心”。

× Well, to be honest, there are not a lot of situations that make me feel impatient, but if someone.

✓ Well, to be honest, there are not a lot of situations that make me feel impatient, but if someone does.

句子末尾缺少谓语动词，导致句子不完整，应补充谓语“does”。

× Who can't understand me that will makes me feel impatient such as I tell him that.

✓ Who can't understand me, that will make me feel impatient, such as when I tell him that.

主语“that”是单数，谓语动词应为“make”而非“makes”；同时句子缺少逗号和连接词使表达更清晰。

× I don't like this but he still do that.

✓ I don't like this, but he still does that.

主语“he”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加“s”变为“does”；同时应加逗号分隔两个分句。

× Well, I will not feel impatient where I have to do something for a long time.

✓ Well, I will not feel impatient when I have to do something for a long time.

“where”用于表示地点，此处应使用时间连词“when”。

× I will feel I want to give up.

✓ I will feel like I want to give up.

缺少介词“like”使表达不完整，应补充“feel like”表示“感觉想要”。

× I don't want to do this thing for a long time, can I? Give up.

✓ I don't want to do this thing for a long time. Can I give up?

原句断句不当，应分为两句，疑问句“Can I give up?”应完整表达。

× But if I have to do this thing.

✓ But if I have to do this thing,

“if”引导的条件状语从句未完成，应与主句连用，不能单独成句。

× I will feel, Oh my gosh, I don't want to do it.

✓ I will feel, "Oh my gosh, I don't want to do it."

引号缺失，直接引语应加引号表示。

× Definitely because my major is law and I want to be a lawyer in the future so.

✓ Definitely, because my major is law and I want to be a lawyer in the future.

句末“so”多余且导致句子不完整，应去掉。

× As a lawyer, you have to be patient to your. Customs to all of people when you meet.

✓ As a lawyer, you have to be patient with your customers and all the people you meet.

“patient”后应接介词“with”；“customs”应为“customers”；“to all of people”表达不当，应为“and all the people”。

× So it's very important for me to keep quiet when I work, when I'm working.

✓ So it's very important for me to keep quiet when I work.

“when I work”和“when I'm working”重复，保留其中一个即可。

× Well, to be honest, I think I'm more patient when there was a child than now.

✓ Well, to be honest, I think I was more patient when I was a child than now.

“there was a child”表达错误，应为“I was a child”；时态应保持一致。

× Because when I was a child, I didn't need to care a lot of things, I just need to happy.

✓ Because when I was a child, I didn't need to care about a lot of things, I just needed to be happy.

“care”后应加介词“about”；“need”时态应与前句一致改为“needed”；“happy”前应加动词“be”。

× But when they. I'm I docked? I need to face a lot of things by myself.

✓ But when I grew up, I needed to face a lot of things by myself.

原句语义不清且结构混乱，应改为“when I grew up”表达成长后；“need”时态应改为过去式“needed”。