Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: In English (Cambodia), you can improve by giving a complete sentence that directly answers the question and then add a reason or example. This will make your answer more natural and effective.

예시: No, I'm not a patient person because I often get frustrated when things take too long.

제안: Try to use linking words and complete sentences to make your answer clearer and more coherent. Also, be specific about situations that make you impatient.

예시: I feel impatient when I am stuck in traffic jams or waiting for food at a restaurant because it wastes my time.

제안: Focus on organizing your ideas clearly and avoid repeating contradictory statements. Use linking words to connect your thoughts logically.

예시: When I have to do something for a long time, I usually feel impatient because I want to finish quickly, but I try to stay focused and patient.

제안: Make sure to answer directly and clearly. Use correct grammar and vocabulary to express your ideas. Avoid confusing phrases and try to explain your answer with reasons.

예시: No, my job requires me to be patient because I need to help customers carefully and not rush.

제안: Try to use complete sentences and correct grammar. Explain your opinion clearly and provide reasons or examples.

예시: I think I am less patient now than when I was a child because I have more responsibilities and less free time.

× Like when traffic jams or waiting for a food.

✓ Like when there are traffic jams or waiting for food.

The phrase 'traffic jams' is plural and needs a plural verb 'are'. Also, 'a food' is incorrect because 'food' is an uncountable noun and does not need an article 'a'. In English, uncountable nouns like 'food' do not use 'a' or 'an'. Use 'there are' for plural subjects like 'traffic jams'.

× Like when traffic jams or waiting for a food.

✓ Like when there are traffic jams or waiting for food.

The sentence lacks the correct 'there be' structure to indicate existence of traffic jams. Use 'there are' to express the presence of plural nouns like 'traffic jams'.

× Or. Waiting for someone to come to meet us.

✓ Or waiting for someone to come and meet us.

The phrase 'come to meet us' is awkward; 'come and meet us' is more natural. Use 'come and meet' to indicate the action of someone arriving to meet.

× Yes. I'm so impatient for that.

✓ Yes. I'm so impatient about that.

The correct preposition with 'impatient' is 'about' when referring to a situation. Use 'impatient about' to express feelings related to something.

× I feel like I want to hurry up when I do something for a long time, but I can, you know, an I'm so patient.

✓ I feel like I want to hurry up when I do something for a long time, but I can't, you know, and I'm so impatient.

The sentence has missing words and incorrect conjunctions. Use 'can't' instead of 'can' to express inability. Use 'and' instead of 'an' to connect clauses. Also, 'patient' should be 'impatient' to match the meaning.

× I'm so impatient that I do something for a long time.

✓ I'm so impatient when I have to do something for a long time.

The phrase 'that I do something' is unclear. Use 'when I have to do something' to express the condition causing impatience.

× Like. In my mind I feel like, oh, why US so?

✓ Like, in my mind I feel like, oh, why is it so?

The sentence is fragmented and 'US' is incorrect. Use 'why is it so?' to form a proper question. Combine fragments into one coherent sentence.

× No, my job and not require me to be impatient because like.

✓ No, my job does not require me to be impatient because, like,

The subject 'my job' is singular and requires 'does' for the negative form. Use 'does not require' instead of 'and not require'.

× No, my job and not require me to be impatient because like.

✓ No, my job does not require me to be impatient because, like,

The verb must agree with the singular subject 'my job'. Use 'does not' for third person singular negative.

× They want to. Be in hurry to give customer dream yes.

✓ They want to be in a hurry to give customers their dreams, yes.

The sentence is fragmented and missing articles and plural forms. Use 'in a hurry' as the correct phrase. 'Customer' should be plural 'customers'. Add 'their' before 'dreams' for clarity.

× I think I'm not because when I. Grow up.

✓ I think I'm not because when I grow up,

The sentence is incomplete and 'grow up' should be in present tense to match the context. Remove unnecessary periods and complete the sentence.

× I feel like I'm in impatient than when I was child.

✓ I feel like I'm more impatient than when I was a child.

'In impatient' is incorrect; it should be 'more impatient' for comparison. Add 'a' before 'child' as it is singular countable noun. Use comparative form 'more impatient' to compare.