Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子，直接回答问题并补充具体细节。

예시: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I usually take my time to understand situations fully. For example, I am willing to wait and listen carefully when working with others.

제안: 表达重复且语法错误较多，建议使用连贯的句子并用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I feel impatient when I face difficult tasks because I want to find effective solutions quickly. However, I try to stay calm and think carefully.

제안: 回答重复且不连贯，建议简洁明了地表达感受，并提供具体原因。

예시: I sometimes feel impatient when I have to do something for a long time because I prefer to finish tasks quickly and efficiently.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，建议直接说明工作内容并解释为什么需要耐心。

예시: Yes, as an IT programmer, I need to be patient because solving complex problems often takes time and careful analysis.

제안: 回答不连贯且有语法错误，建议清晰表达比较并举例说明耐心的重要性。

예시: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned that patience helps me solve problems better at work and in life.

× Yes, I am a patient person from my perspective, often take a long time to sync all for the significant sense.

✓ Yes, I am a patient person from my perspective, and I often take a long time to sync everything for a significant reason.

句子中缺少主语“I”在“often take”前，导致动词形式错误。英语中，主语缺失会导致谓语动词形式不正确，应补充主语。

× I often showed pay payment for the others people who helped me.

✓ I often showed appreciation to the other people who helped me.

“showed pay payment for”搭配错误，应使用“showed appreciation to”表达感谢。介词“for”用法不当，应改为“to”。

× Sometimes if I encounter some the tough task that could that would make me feel impatient because I want to find out effective solution to tackle problems in short term that could put influence on my patient.

✓ Sometimes, if I encounter a tough task, it would make me feel impatient because I want to find an effective solution to tackle problems in the short term that could influence my patience.

“some the tough task”中“some”和“the”不能同时使用，应选用冠词“a”。“effective solution”前缺少冠词“an”。“put influence on my patient”表达错误，应为“influence my patience”。

× Sometimes if I encounter some the tough task that could that would make me feel impatient because I want to find out effective solution to tackle problems in short term that could put influence on my patient.

✓ Sometimes, if I encounter a tough task, it would make me feel impatient because I want to find an effective solution to tackle problems in the short term that could influence my patience.

“in short term”缺少定冠词“the”，应为“in the short term”。

× I could feel a sense of for impatient because I want to find out effective solution to tackle the problem problem.

✓ I could feel a sense of impatience because I want to find an effective solution to tackle the problem.

“a sense of for impatient”中“for”多余且“impatient”应为名词形式“impatience”。

× I want to find out effective solution to tackle the problem problem.

✓ I want to find out an effective solution to tackle the problem.

“effective solution”缺少冠词“an”，且“problem problem”重复，应去掉重复。

× I don't want to take long time. To do to do sense that could make me or feel awful impatient.

✓ I don't want to take a long time to do it because that could make me feel very impatient.

句子结构混乱，重复“to do”，缺少连词，表达不清，应调整为完整句子。

× Yes, I saw IT programmer.

✓ Yes, I am an IT programmer.

“saw”用错，应为“am”表示职业身份。

× That job would require me take a long time to find out underlying problem and the find out effective solution to tackle problems that require me to be a patient person in my office.

✓ That job requires me to take a long time to find the underlying problem and find an effective solution to tackle problems, which requires me to be a patient person in my office.

“would require me take”缺少不定式“to”，且时态应为一般现在时。

× That job would require me take a long time to find out underlying problem and the find out effective solution to tackle problems that require me to be a patient person in my office.

✓ That job requires me to take a long time to find the underlying problem and find an effective solution to tackle problems, which requires me to be a patient person in my office.

“underlying problem”前缺少定冠词“the”，应为“the underlying problem”。

× No, this I am more patient because I learned the patient how important the patient to eat.

✓ No, now I am more patient because I have learned how important patience is.

“this I am”语序错误，应为“now I am”。“learned the patient how important the patient to eat”表达不通，应改为“have learned how important patience is”。

× No, this I am more patient because I learned the patient how important the patient to eat.

✓ No, now I am more patient because I have learned how important patience is.

“the patient”用错，应为名词“patience”，且“to eat”无意义，应删除。

× For example, in my office, I must keep patient for iriver under Finder out to the effective solution to tackle problems from the team member and the customers that is looking.

✓ For example, in my office, I must keep patient and strive to find effective solutions to tackle problems from team members and customers who are looking for help.

“keep patient for iriver under Finder out to the effective solution”表达混乱，介词使用错误，应改为“keep patient and strive to find effective solutions”。

× For example, in my office, I must keep patient for iriver under Finder out to the effective solution to tackle problems from the team member and the customers that is looking.

✓ For example, in my office, I must keep patient and strive to find effective solutions to tackle problems from team members and customers who are looking for help.

“team member”应为复数“team members”，“customers that is”主谓不一致，应为“customers who are”。