Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat natural but has grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to avoid repeating words and improve sentence structure. Also, be concise and clear. For example, say "Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I prefer to do things carefully and at a slow pace."

예시: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I prefer to do things carefully and at a slow pace, paying attention to details.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Avoid asking questions back to the examiner and focus on answering directly. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific. For example, "I feel impatient when I have to wait for a long time, especially in places like hospitals or restaurants, because it feels like a waste of time and I prefer to be productive."

예시: I feel impatient when I have to wait for a long time, especially in places like hospitals or restaurants, because it feels like a waste of time and I prefer to be productive.

제안: Your answer is fragmented and unclear. Try to form complete sentences and avoid pauses or filler words. Also, clarify your ideas and use linking words. For example, "When I have to do something for a long time, I make sure I am mentally prepared. For instance, studying for a medical degree requires patience and mental strength."

예시: When I have to do something for a long time, I make sure I am mentally prepared. For instance, studying for a medical degree requires patience and mental strength.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors. Try to give a clear and complete response. Use linking words to explain your point. For example, "Yes, being a student requires patience because I have to learn and remember a lot of information."

예시: Yes, being a student requires patience because I have to learn and remember a lot of information.

제안: Your answer is generally clear but has some grammatical mistakes. Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid redundancy. For example, "Yes, I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child because as I grew older, life became more complicated and required more effort."

예시: Yes, I am definitely more patient now than when I was a child because as I grew older, life became more complicated and required more effort.

× Because I think I'm more like a slow paced personalities.

✓ Because I think I have a slow-paced personality.

The word 'personalities' is plural, but the subject refers to a single person, so it should be singular 'personality'. Also, 'slow paced' should be hyphenated as 'slow-paced' when used as an adjective.

× So I I I like to do things slowly and just about in detail and particular.

✓ So I like to do things slowly and pay attention to detail and be particular.

The phrase 'just about in detail and particular' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'pay attention to detail' and 'be particular'. Also, 'just about' is unnecessary here.

× Are you gonna feel impatient when I have to wait for a long time?

✓ Do you feel impatient when you have to wait for a long time?

The question is about the student's feelings, so 'Are you gonna' is informal and incorrect here. It should be 'Do you feel'. Also, 'I have to wait' should be 'you have to wait' to match the question.

× Is specially in places like hospitals or restaurants or just when I have to stay in long ones.

✓ Especially in places like hospitals or restaurants or just when I have to stay in long lines.

'Is specially' is incorrect; it should be 'Especially'. Also, 'stay in long ones' is unclear; likely meant 'stay in long lines' or 'wait for a long time'.

× Kiss waiting for hours can be frustrating and it just feel like a waste of my time.

✓ Just waiting for hours can be frustrating and it just feels like a waste of my time.

'Kiss' is a typo for 'Just'. Also, 'feel' should be 'feels' to agree with singular subject 'it'.

× Well, I think of course I will first have to make sure myself is mentally prepared for that long things.

✓ Well, I think of course I will first have to make sure myself is mentally prepared for those long things.

'That long things' is incorrect; 'things' is plural, so it should be 'those long things'. Also, 'myself is' is awkward; better to say 'I am' or 'I am mentally prepared'.

× This depends if it's like studying for doctor degree.

✓ This depends if it's like studying for a doctoral degree.

'Doctor degree' is incorrect; the correct term is 'doctoral degree'. Also, 'if it's like' is informal; better to say 'if it is' or 'if it involves'.

× I will definitely make sure that I actually have the ability. I have the patience. I have the. Men's side.

✓ I will definitely make sure that I actually have the ability and the patience. I have the mindset.

'Men's side' is incorrect and unclear; likely meant 'mindset'. Also, the sentence fragments should be combined for clarity.

× Yes, certainly I think this not just for. My job is for any kind of job.

✓ Yes, certainly. I think this is not just for my job but for any kind of job.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs to be combined properly with correct verb 'is' and conjunction 'but'.

× Currently I'm still student, so my job is just to study any required to be patient because you have a lot of things to learn and to remember Sony you need to be very.

✓ Currently, I'm still a student, so my job is just to study. It requires patience because you have a lot of things to learn and remember, so you need to be very patient.

Missing article 'a' before 'student'. The sentence is fragmented and unclear; 'any required to be patient' is incorrect. 'Sony' is likely a typo for 'so'. The sentence needs to be split and clarified.

× Yes, I would definitely say so. Because I see you grew older, things are getting more complicated and require more effort.

✓ Yes, I would definitely say so because as you grow older, things get more complicated and require more effort.

'I see you grew older' mixes tenses incorrectly. It should be 'as you grow older' to indicate a general truth. Also, 'things are getting' should be 'things get' for general statements.

× So I would definitely became more patient because a lot of things requires me to be more devoted.

✓ So I have definitely become more patient because a lot of things require me to be more devoted.

'Would definitely became' is incorrect; 'became' is past tense, but 'would' requires base form 'become'. Also, 'requires' should be 'require' to agree with plural subject 'things'.