Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，导致意思难以理解。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和语法错误。

예시: Yes, I think I am a patient person. For example, when someone asks me for help repeatedly, I don't get angry or bored. I am willing to listen and assist them patiently.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不流畅的问题，建议使用连贯的句子并准确表达原因。

예시: I usually am patient, but I feel impatient when I have a tight deadline and something blocks my progress. This makes me worry that I might not finish on time.

제안: 回答较为完整，但句子结构和用词可以更自然流畅。建议使用更地道的表达和连接词。

예시: I don't mind doing something for a long time because I believe practice makes perfect. Each time I complete the task, I can see some progress, which motivates me to keep going.

제안: 回答内容较好，但句子断裂影响流畅性。建议使用连贯的句子并适当丰富细节。

예시: Yes, my job as a software engineer requires a lot of patience. For example, debugging code can be time-consuming and unpredictable, so I need to stay calm and persistent until I find and fix the bugs.

제안: 回答中断句不当，表达不够清晰。建议用完整句子表达观点，并举例说明。

예시: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. I have learned that patience helps me focus better on my tasks and achieve better results.

× Yes, I think I am impatient person because for instance when someone asked me problems I can.

✓ Yes, I think I am an impatient person because, for instance, when someone asks me problems I can.

这里缺少冠词'an'，'impatient person'是单数名词短语，前面需要加不定冠词。

× when someone asked me problems I can.

✓ when someone asks me problems, I can.

这里描述的是习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时，'asked'应改为'asks'。

× Tell them again and again and I won't fill. Angry or? Bored, so I think I'm a patient person.

✓ I can tell them again and again and I won't feel angry or bored, so I think I'm a patient person.

句子结构混乱，'fill'应为'feel'，'Angry or? Bored'应合并为'angry or bored'，并且句子缺少主语和谓语，需调整为完整句子。

× Are you sure? I'm usually a patient person, but in sometimes I do feel impatient.

✓ Are you sure? I'm usually a patient person, but sometimes I do feel impatient.

'in sometimes'是不正确的搭配，正确用法是直接用'sometimes'，不需要介词'in'。

× if I have a deadline for tasks and something is blocking me to progress, then I do feel impatient because I'm afraid that I can finish it.

✓ if I have a deadline for tasks and something is blocking me from progressing, then I do feel impatient because I'm afraid that I can't finish it.

'blocking me to progress'应改为'blocking me from progressing'，'block'后面接介词'from'加动名词形式。

× I'm afraid that I can finish it.

✓ I'm afraid that I can't finish it.

表达担心不能完成任务，应该用否定形式'can't'，而不是肯定的'can'。

× I'm totally fine for doing one thing for a long time because I think practice makes perfect and if I do a task for a long time, I still can find progress in every time I complete it.

✓ I'm totally fine with doing one thing for a long time because I think practice makes perfect and if I do a task for a long time, I can still find progress every time I complete it.

'fine for doing'应改为'fine with doing'，'in every time'应改为'every time'，介词使用错误。

× So I'm totally good with doing a thing.

✓ So I'm totally good with doing a thing.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× And when debugging code you actually can't. Have an actual time when you finish, so you really have to be patient when finding the bugs.

✓ And when debugging code, you actually can't have a definite time when you finish, so you really have to be patient when finding the bugs.

句子断开不完整，'can't. Have'应合并为'can't have'，并且缺少形容词'definite'来修饰'time'，使句子完整通顺。

× Yes, I am more patient now when I'm compared when I was a child because I think that.

✓ Yes, I am more patient now compared to when I was a child because I think that.

'when I'm compared when I was a child'结构不正确，应该用'compared to when I was a child'来表达比较对象。

× Only patience. Your heart will be patient and then you can be more focused on doing what you're doing.

✓ Only with patience will your heart be patient, and then you can be more focused on doing what you're doing.

句子缺少主语和谓语，'Only patience.'不完整，需改为完整句子表达条件关系。