Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid filler words. Also, keep your answer concise and clear within 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I have been taking this exam for six years without success. Despite the challenges, I have remained persistent and hopeful that I will pass soon.

제안: Your answer has repetition and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid filler words. Also, try to express your thoughts clearly and grammatically.

예시: I feel impatient when I put a lot of effort into something but do not see results quickly. However, I try to manage these feelings maturely, although it can be difficult at times.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has some grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid repeating similar ideas.

예시: When I have to do something for a long time, I stay focused and take it one step at a time. I try not to stress about other things and concentrate on completing each task carefully.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to answer directly and clearly, using proper sentence structure and linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: Honestly, I have not worked before, but I believe I can handle pressure well. If I have a job, I would be patient and take all necessary steps to complete my tasks.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using linking words and clearer sentence structures. Avoid incomplete sentences and be more specific in your explanation.

예시: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. I used to be impatient and wanted immediate results, but over the years, I have learned to be more patient and understand that good things take time.

× Yes, I'm actually quite alot patient person because I have been giving this exam for the past six years and I haven't had a good luck in those exams.

✓ Yes, I'm actually quite a patient person because I have been giving this exam for the past six years and I haven't had good luck in those exams.

The phrase 'quite alot patient person' is incorrect because 'alot' is not a quantifier and is misspelled. The correct quantifier here is 'a' before 'patient person'. Also, 'a good luck' is incorrect because 'luck' is an uncountable noun and does not take an article 'a'. The correct phrase is 'good luck'.

× And I hopefully. Will pass.

✓ And I will hopefully pass.

The original sentence incorrectly splits 'hopefully' and 'will pass' into two fragments. The modal verb 'will' should be used with 'hopefully' in the same sentence to express future hope. The correct structure is 'I will hopefully pass.'

× Sometimes when I when I'm I'm putting a lot of efforts in something and I don't get the outcomes easily.

✓ Sometimes when I'm putting a lot of effort into something and I don't get the outcomes easily.

The phrase 'putting a lot of efforts in something' is incorrect. 'Effort' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'efforts' here. Also, the correct preposition to use with 'putting effort' is 'into' not 'in'.

× So. I still tried to cope up with all these negative emotions. Mature Lee.

✓ So, I still try to cope with all these negative emotions maturely.

The phrase 'tried to cope up' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'try to cope'. Also, 'cope up' is not standard English; 'cope with' is correct. 'Mature Lee' is a mishearing or misspelling of 'maturely', which is the correct adverb form. The sentence should be in present tense to match the context.

× I still tried to cope up with all these negative emotions. Mature Lee.

✓ I still try to cope with all these negative emotions maturely.

The phrase 'cope up with' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'cope with'. Also, 'Mature Lee' is a misspelling of 'maturely', which is the correct adverb form to describe how the coping is done.

× I still tried to cope up with all these negative emotions. Mature Lee. But sometimes life happens.

✓ I still try to cope with all these negative emotions maturely, but sometimes life happens.

The sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect verb tense and preposition use. 'Tried' should be 'try' to maintain present tense. 'Cope up with' should be 'cope with'. 'Mature Lee' should be 'maturely'. The sentence should be combined properly with a comma and lowercase 'but'.

× I don't really feel tired, I just focus. One step at a time and try to do it. And not stressed about the other things. And just try to complete 1 task at a hand.

✓ I don't really feel tired; I just focus on one step at a time and try to do it, and not get stressed about other things. I just try to complete one task at hand.

The number '1' should be written as 'one' in formal speech. The phrase 'at a hand' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'at hand'. Also, 'not stressed about the other things' should be 'not get stressed about other things' for grammatical correctness.

× Farming honest I haven't really worked and got any experience but I believe I came pressure handle very well if any task comes in my way and I tried to be.

✓ Frankly, I haven't really worked or gained any experience, but I believe I can handle pressure very well if any task comes my way, and I try to be patient with my work.

'Farming honest' is a mishearing of 'frankly'. 'Got any experience' should be 'gained any experience'. 'I came pressure handle' should be 'I can handle pressure'. 'Comes in my way' should be 'comes my way'. The sentence also needs proper conjunctions and verb forms for clarity.

× And. Take all the necessary steps which needs to be taken.

✓ And take all the necessary steps which need to be taken.

The verb 'needs' should be 'need' to agree with the plural noun 'steps'. Also, the sentence fragment 'And.' should be connected to the previous sentence for completeness.

× Of course I'm really patient.

✓ Of course, I'm really patient now.

Adding 'now' clarifies the comparison with the past and fits the context of being more patient now than before.

× I have learned through all these years how to not be an impatient person.

✓ I have learned over all these years how not to be an impatient person.

The phrase 'through all these years' is better expressed as 'over all these years'. Also, 'how to not be' is less natural than 'how not to be'.

× When I was a child, I used to be very impatient and really wanted to get results the moment at try something new.

✓ When I was a child, I used to be very impatient and really wanted to get results the moment I tried something new.

The phrase 'the moment at try something new' is incorrect. It should be 'the moment I tried something new' to correctly express past action.