Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和表达不够准确，建议注意时态和句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I believe I am a patient person because I can stay calm and control my emotions when I face difficulties.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，建议使用完整句子并注意时态和词汇的正确使用。

예시: I feel impatient when I have to wait for a long time, especially when I am buying something.

제안: 回答不连贯且语法错误较多，建议简洁明了地表达感受，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: When I have to do something for a long time, I usually feel tired, especially if I study for several hours without a break.

제안: 回答中词汇使用错误且表达不清晰，建议使用正确的词汇并简洁明了地回答问题。

예시: Yes, my job as a teacher requires a lot of patience because I often need to explain concepts to students.

제안: 回答中句子结构混乱，建议使用完整句子并清晰表达比较和原因。

예시: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I can manage my emotions better after facing many difficulties.

× Yes, I believe I'm a patient person because I can stay calm in the control my emotions when I faced troubles.

✓ Yes, I believe I'm a patient person because I can stay calm and control my emotions when I face troubles.

句中'in the control my emotions'结构不正确，应改为'control my emotions'，动词后直接接宾语。且时态应与一般现在时保持一致。

× One I had to wait for a long time.

✓ When I have to wait for a long time.

句首的'One'用法错误，应为时间状语'When'，且时态应为一般现在时。

× I usually still impatient.

✓ I am usually still impatient.

缺少系动词'am'，形容词'impatient'前需有be动词。

× Especially one I buying something.

✓ Especially when I am buying something.

'one'用法错误，应为时间状语'when'，且动词'buying'前需有be动词'am'。

× What I have to do something for a long time and usually feel tired, especially will I? Study for several hours without a break.

✓ When I have to do something for a long time, I usually feel tired, especially when I study for several hours without a break.

句子结构混乱，缺少连词和正确的时态，需调整为完整的条件状语从句和主句。

× Yes Sir, my job as our teacher requires a lot of pensions 'cause I often need to expense concepto students.

✓ Yes Sir, my job as a teacher requires a lot of patience because I often need to explain concepts to students.

'our teacher'应为'a teacher'，'pensions'应为'patience'，'expense concepto'应为'explain concepts'，代词和词汇使用错误。

× Yes, I'm more patient. And now they were. I was a child.

✓ Yes, I'm more patient now than when I was a child.

句子断裂且时态混乱，应合并为一句完整比较句，保持时态一致。

× I can manage my emotions better. One I've faced difficulties.

✓ I can manage my emotions better when I've faced difficulties.

'One'用法错误，应为时间状语'when'，连接句子使其完整。