Patience— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，存在语法和表达错误，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并避免无关内容。

예시: Yes, I am a patient person because I believe good things take time to happen, so I usually like to wait calmly.

제안: 回答内容不清晰，语法混乱，建议用简单句表达具体原因，并避免无关信息。

예시: I feel impatient when I have difficulty learning English because it takes a long time to improve.

제안: 表达有语法错误，句子不完整，建议使用完整句子并清晰表达情感变化。

예시: At first, I feel impatient when doing something for a long time, but then I focus and try my best to achieve good results.

제안: 回答中断且表达不清，建议简洁说明工作内容和耐心的重要性。

예시: Yes, my job requires patience because it takes a long time to find customers and complete sales.

제안: 表达不够清晰，建议用完整句子说明耐心的变化和原因。

예시: Yes, I am more patient now because I understand that good things take time and I pay more attention to long-term goals.

× I think good thing comes on with a lot of times, so I syncopation is very good quality and are usually.

✓ I think good things come with a lot of time, so patience is a very good quality and usually I like to wait.

这里“good thing”应为复数形式“good things”，因为指的是多件好事；“comes”应改为“come”以匹配复数主语；“a lot of times”应改为“a lot of time”，表示大量时间；“syncopation”应为“patience”，原词用错；“are usually”结构不完整，应补充主语和谓语。

× I syncopation is very good quality and are usually.

✓ Patience is a very good quality and I usually like to wait.

句中“are usually”缺少主语，且“syncopation”用词错误，应为“patience”；需要使用正确的人称代词和完整句子结构。

× Yes, teaching minded assists are learning English makes me feel impatient because for me.

✓ Yes, teaching-minded assistants learning English make me feel impatient because of me.

“assists”应为“assistants”，且“are learning”应改为“learning”作为主语；“because for me”表达不清，应改为“because of me”或更合适的表达。

× Because my sister is in prominence, Koran, English, their voice very low so.

✓ Because my sister is in prominence, Korean, English, her voice is very low, so.

“their voice”指代单数“my sister”，应使用单数“her voice”；句子结构不完整，缺少谓语“is”。

× It made me really impatient.

✓ It makes me really impatient.

根据上下文，描述的是现在的感受，应使用一般现在时“makes”而非过去时“made”。

× I might feel impatience at beginning, but when I stop this test and I will concentrate on it and put.

✓ I might feel impatience at the beginning, but when I start this test, I will concentrate on it and put

“at beginning”应为“at the beginning”；“stop this test”应为“start this test”符合语境；句子未完成，需补充完整。

× 100% of my constructions in these things because I really want to get a good result.

✓ 100% of my concentration on these things because I really want to get a good result.

“constructions”应为“concentration”，表示专注；“in these things”应为“on these things”，介词使用错误。

× I work as international service in a solar mounting industry.

✓ I work in international service in the solar mounting industry.

“work as international service”应为“work in international service”，表示在某领域工作；“a solar mounting industry”应为“the solar mounting industry”，特指该行业。

× You know. Imma take a long time to get some customers and get a fee based so only the times we're terror. You.

✓ You know, it takes a long time to get some customers and get a fee-based income, so only sometimes we're tired.

“Imma”应为“it takes”；“fee based”应为“fee-based”；“times we're terror”应为“times we're tired”；句子结构混乱，需调整。

× Yes, as I get older, I believe that's the best things.

✓ Yes, as I get older, I believe those are the best things.

“that's”是单数指示代词，应改为复数“those are”以匹配复数“things”。

× Always kind comes with a long period.

✓ Good things always come after a long period.

“kind comes with a long period”表达不准确，应改为“come after a long period”，表示“好事总是在长时间之后发生”。

× So I may pay a much more attention to **** someone things with a long time.

✓ So I may pay much more attention to some things over a long time.

“a much more attention”应为“much more attention”；“to **** someone things”应为“to some things”；“with a long time”应为“over a long time”；句子中有乱码需修正。