Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应直接回应问题，避免重复和语法错误。可以简洁表达吃零食的时间，并说明原因。

예시: I usually eat snacks like small cakes in the afternoon because they help me relax and feel happy after studying.

제안: 回答时应注意语法和用词准确，避免错误。可以说明零食不健康的原因，并表达个人喜好。

예시: I don't think eating snacks is very healthy because they often contain a lot of sugar, but I enjoy them because they make me happy and help me study better.

제안: 回答应更自然流畅，注意语法结构。可以说明父母限制零食的原因并简洁表达。

예시: No, my parents controlled my snack intake when I was young because they didn't want my teeth to get damaged.

제안: 回答应避免语法错误和重复，内容应具体且连贯。可以描述喜欢的零食种类及原因。

예시: I like eating chocolate because it tastes delicious and can be found in many forms like cakes, candies, and bars.

× Yes, I usually eat the snacks like the small cakes.

✓ Yes, I usually eat snacks like small cakes.

这里'snacks'前不需要定冠词'the'，而且'snacks'是复数，'small cakes'也应为复数形式。去掉'the'使表达更自然。

× I think the cakes can stress my deliver my stress and it can make me very happy and comfortable.

✓ I think the cakes can relieve my stress and make me very happy and comfortable.

原句中'can stress my deliver my stress'结构混乱，应该用'relieve my stress'表示缓解压力，且不需要重复。

× No, I think he's not healthy but I really like to eat it.

✓ No, I think it's not healthy but I really like to eat it.

这里指代'snacks'，应使用中性代词'it'，而不是'he'。

× Eat snakes can make me feel happiness and can help me keep the effective study style.

✓ Eating snacks can make me feel happy and can help me maintain an effective study style.

'Eat snakes'应改为动名词形式'Eating snacks'，'snakes'应为'snacks'，'feel happiness'应为'feel happy'，'keep the effective study style'表达不自然，改为'maintain an effective study style'。

× No, my parents control me, make me don't eat more chocolate and the candy so they don't want to make my teeth broken.

✓ No, my parents controlled me and made me not eat too much chocolate and candy because they didn't want my teeth to be broken.

描述过去的行为，动词应使用过去式，'control'改为'controlled'，'make'改为'made'，'don't eat'改为'not eat'，'the candy'改为'candy'，'make my teeth broken'改为'my teeth to be broken'。

× I like to eat chocolate. I think the chocolate is a wonderful food for me.

✓ I like to eat chocolate. I think chocolate is a wonderful food for me.

'the chocolate'不需要定冠词，且前后保持一致。

× They can be made chocolate cake, chocolate candy, chocolate flour and so on.

✓ Chocolate can be made into chocolate cake, chocolate candy, chocolate flour and so on.

'They'指代不明，应改为'Chocolate'，并且动词结构调整为'can be made into'。

× It's a it can.

✓ It can be used in many ways.

原句结构混乱，缺乏完整意义，改为完整句子表达巧克力的多种用途。