Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些语法错误，表达不够自然，且句子较长且不连贯。建议简化句子结构，注意时态和单复数形式，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I usually eat snacks between 8:00 and 9:00 AM because I am very busy in the morning and don't have enough time for breakfast. Snacks help me maintain my energy. Besides, I also like to eat snacks when I feel hungry during the day.

제안: 回答内容较好，但表达有些重复且语法不准确。建议使用更准确的词汇，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Although I eat snacks in the morning, I don't think they are very healthy because many contain additives that can harm our health. However, I choose them for convenience, but I try to limit my intake for the sake of my health.

제안: 回答中有严重语法错误和词汇使用错误，且表达不清晰。建议学习正确的时态和词汇，避免拼写错误，并组织清晰的句子。

예시: When I was young, I didn't often eat snacks because my mother limited them. She believed snacks were unhealthy and lacked nutrition. However, I liked snacks such as chocolates and candies, so I saved money to buy them sometimes.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议使用正确的表达方式，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: I definitely like candies. I remember when I was a little girl, I loved colorful candies because they looked beautiful and tasted sweet. Even now, when I feel upset, I like to eat candies because they make me feel happy.

× I usually eat snacks between 8:00 to 9:00 AM because in the morning I always very busy so I don't have enough time to have breakfast and the snacks is a good choice for me.

✓ I usually eat snacks between 8:00 and 9:00 AM because in the morning I am always very busy so I don't have enough time to have breakfast and snacks are a good choice for me.

介词搭配错误，'between'后应接'and'而非'to'。此外，句中缺少动词'am'，且'snacks'为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'。建议注意介词搭配和主谓一致。

× the snacks is a good choice for me.

✓ snacks are a good choice for me.

主语'snacks'为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'，而非单数'is'。

× It can fall on my energy and what's more, I also like to eat snacks when I.

✓ It can boost my energy and what's more, I also like to eat snacks sometimes.

句子结构不完整，'fall on my energy'表达错误，应为'boost my energy'。句尾'incomplete'，缺少完整表达，建议补充完整句子。

× I usually eat snacks between 8:00 to 9:00 AM because in the morning I always very busy so I don't have enough time to have breakfast and the snacks is a good choice for me.

✓ I usually eat snacks between 8:00 and 9:00 AM because in the morning I am always very busy so I don't have enough time to have breakfast and snacks are a good choice for me.

重复前面错误，介词'between'后应接'and'，非'to'。

× Well, even I eat some snacks in the morning, I don't think it's very healthy for me.

✓ Well, even though I eat some snacks in the morning, I don't think it's very healthy for me.

缺少连词，'even'后应使用'though'构成连词短语'even though'，表示让步。

× As we all know in the some snacks there are a lot of additives in it which harm our health.

✓ As we all know, some snacks contain a lot of additives which harm our health.

介词'in the some snacks'错误，应改为'some snacks contain'，更符合英语表达习惯。

× So I just choose it because it's convenient.

✓ So I just choose them because they're convenient.

'snacks'为复数，代词应使用复数'them'和'they're'。

× But for my health I will limit it.

✓ But for my health, I will limit them.

代词应与先行词复数一致，'snacks'对应'them'。

× When you were young, No I don't.

✓ When I was young, no, I didn't.

时态错误，描述过去应使用过去时，'don't'应改为'didn't'。

× I remember when I under 80 years old, my mother always limited the snake I eat because she believed that the snakes are alone of nutrition and unhealthy.

✓ I remember when I was under 8 years old, my mother always limited the snacks I ate because she believed that the snacks are lacking in nutrition and unhealthy.

时态错误，'under'后应加动词'was'，'eat'应为过去式'ate'。'snake'应为'snack'。表达不当，'alone of nutrition'应为'lacking in nutrition'。

× But I very like that snakes such as chopsticks, candies, so I always save my money to buy.

✓ But I really like those snacks such as chips and candies, so I always save my money to buy them.

代词使用错误，'that'应为'those'指复数。'chopsticks'错误，应为'chips'。缺少代词'them'。

× Definitely the candies, I remember when I was a lady girl.

✓ Definitely candies. I remember when I was a little girl.

'lady girl'表达错误，应为'little girl'。

× I love that colorful candies so much.

✓ I love those colorful candies so much.

'candies'为复数，指示代词应使用复数形式'those'。

× Until now I when I feel upset I also like to eat some candies.

✓ Even now, when I feel upset, I also like to eat some candies.

句子结构混乱，'Until now I when I feel upset'不通顺，应调整为'Even now, when I feel upset,'。

× It can make me happy and feel happiness.

✓ It can make me happy and feel happy.

'feel happiness'表达不自然，应改为'feel happy'，形容词用法更合适。