Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“at work days”应为“on workdays”，“dealing many job works”表达不清且不自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并注意句子结构的完整性和连贯性。

예시: I usually eat snacks on workdays because I often feel anxious when I have a lot of tasks to handle. For example, I like to eat crisps as they help me relax during busy hours.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，如“it snacks are not healthy”应为“snacks are not healthy”，“always free”表达不明确。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免模糊表达，并且注意句子连贯。

예시: I think snacks are often unhealthy because they usually contain high sugar and fat. However, some snacks like salads or sandwiches can be healthy options.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，如“think they thought”重复且不自然，“not healthy to my body health”表达冗余。建议简化表达，使用更准确的词汇，并注意句子流畅。

예시: I didn't often eat snacks as a child because my parents were strict about my diet. They believed snacks were unhealthy and could harm my teeth.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，如“is is”和“a a”，以及“have”应为“has”。建议注意语法细节，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达。

예시: I like to eat fried chicken because it has crispy skin and juicy meat, and it always looks very appetizing.

× I usually eat snacks at work days because during work days I always feel so anxious.

✓ I usually eat snacks on workdays because during workdays I always feel so anxious.

“work days”应写作一个词“workdays”，表示工作日，属于复合名词的单复数问题。

× I usually eat snacks at work days because during work days I always feel so anxious.

✓ I usually eat snacks on workdays because during workdays I always feel so anxious.

表示“在工作日”，应使用介词“on”而非“at”，这是介词使用错误。

× When dealing many job works I usually eat crisps that can help me calm down.

✓ When dealing with many job tasks, I usually eat crisps that can help me calm down.

动词“deal”后应接介词“with”，且“job works”不常用，应改为“job tasks”，这是介词使用错误和词汇搭配错误。

× When dealing many job works I usually eat crisps that can help me calm down.

✓ When dealing with many job tasks, I usually eat crisps that can help me calm down.

“job works”应改为“job tasks”，因为“work”作为不可数名词时不加复数，复数形式应用“tasks”。

× I think it snacks are not healthy in many situations because most of the snacks have high sugar, high fat and always free.

✓ I think snacks are not healthy in many situations because most of the snacks have high sugar, high fat and are always free.

“it snacks”中“it”多余，应去掉；“always free”前缺少动词“are”，涉及单复数和句子结构问题。

× I think it snacks are not healthy in many situations because most of the snacks have high sugar, high fat and always free.

✓ I think snacks are not healthy in many situations because most of the snacks have high sugar, high fat and are always free.

连接词“and”连接的成分应保持一致，缺少“are”导致结构不完整。

× But there are some snacks are healthy to our health like salad or sandwiches.

✓ But some snacks are healthy for our health, like salad or sandwiches.

句子中“there are some snacks are”结构重复，应简化为“some snacks are”，这是句子结构错误。

× But there are some snacks are healthy to our health like salad or sandwiches.

✓ But some snacks are healthy for our health, like salad or sandwiches.

“healthy to our health”应改为“healthy for our health”，介词使用错误。

× I didn't usually eat snacks when I was a child because my parents were quite strict about my diet.

✓ I didn't usually eat snacks when I was a child because my parents were quite strict about my diet.

此句时态正确，无需修改。

× They think they thought snacks were not healthy to my body health and were not good for my teeth.

✓ They thought snacks were not healthy for my body and were not good for my teeth.

“They think they thought”时态混乱，应只用过去时“thought”；“healthy to my body health”表达不自然，应改为“healthy for my body”。

× They think they thought snacks were not healthy to my body health and were not good for my teeth.

✓ They thought snacks were not healthy for my body and were not good for my teeth.

“healthy to my body health”中介词“to”用错，应为“for”，且“body health”重复，简化为“body”。

× They may cause many damages to me.

✓ They may cause much damage to me.

“damages”通常不可数，表示“损害”时用“damage”，且“many”用于可数名词，应改为“much”。

× They may cause many damages to me.

✓ They may cause much damage to me.

“to me”表达不自然，建议改为“to me”或“to my health”，但此处“to me”可接受。

× I like to eat fried chicken because not only is is crisp skin and juicy meat, but also it always have a a good appearance.

✓ I like to eat fried chicken because not only does it have crisp skin and juicy meat, but it also always has a good appearance.

“is is”重复，应改为“does it have”；“have”应为第三人称单数“has”；“a a”重复，应去掉一个“a”。