Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时句子结构较为复杂且有语法错误，表达不够简洁自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇。

예시: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon because I often feel hungry and sleepy at that time. Snacks help me stay awake and prepare for studying.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构不够清晰，且有语法错误。建议使用更准确的表达方式，并增加连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: I don't think eating snacks is very healthy, but it helps me relax and reduce stress. Therefore, the emotional benefit is more important to me.

제안: 时态使用不准确，句子结构不够清晰。建议注意时态一致性，简化句子并使用连接词。

예시: Yes, I used to eat snacks when I was a kid, but not very often. I ate them a few times a week, especially on weekends.

제안: 回答中有重复和不连贯的表达，词汇使用不准确。建议简化表达，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇和连接词。

예시: I usually like fried potato chips because they are common in my country. Sometimes, I also eat other fried foods, which are less common but very tasty.

× Yeah, when I was a kid I always eat snacks, but it is not that often.

✓ Yeah, when I was a kid I always ate snacks, but it was not that often.

这里描述的是过去的习惯动作，应该使用过去时态。'eat'应改为过去式'eat'的过去式'ate'，'is'应改为过去式'was'。

× Well, for me, I usually eat snacks in the afternoons because I think this period of times or the time that I am likely to become hungry and likely to become sleepy.

✓ Well, for me, I usually eat snacks in the afternoon because I think this period of time or the time that I am likely to become hungry and likely to become sleepy.

'afternoons'应为单数形式'afternoon'，表示一般的时间段；'period of times'应为单数形式'period of time'，因为'period'已经表示一段时间，后面不需要复数。

× Well, I usually like to eat fried potato chips because it is the most commonly seen snack in in my country and also sometimes I will eat some fried food and these are not that often often autonomy seen in my country, but I think they are all very delicious.

✓ Well, I usually like to eat fried potato chips because it is the most commonly seen snack in my country and also sometimes I will eat some fried food and these are not that often seen in my country, but I think they are all very delicious.

句中'in in'重复，应去掉一个'in'；'often often autonomy seen'中'autonomy'用词错误，应删除，且'not that often often'重复，应改为'not that often'。

× So I think maybe snacks to help me to keep awake and prepare for the study in the afternoon.

✓ So I think maybe snacks help me to keep awake and prepare for the study in the afternoon.

句子缺少谓语动词，'snacks to help'结构不完整，应改为'snacks help'，使用一般现在时表达习惯性动作。

× Well, actually I don't think it is very healthy for me, but it is way for me to relax and kind of reduce my stress.

✓ Well, actually I don't think it is very healthy for me, but it is a way for me to relax and kind of reduce my stress.

'it is way'缺少冠词'a'，应为'a way'，表示一种方式。