Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally good but can be improved by correcting minor grammatical errors and making the sentences more concise. For example, say "when I am feeling a bit hungry" instead of "when I feeling a bit hungry." Also, avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas smoothly using linking words like "so" or "therefore."

예시: I usually eat snacks in the late afternoon, around 4 or 5 PM, when I am feeling a bit hungry. For example, I often have fruits or nuts between lunch and dinner to keep my energy levels up, so I avoid overeating during dinner. This routine helps me stay focused throughout the day.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains a confusing phrase "prevents overeating during May" which seems incorrect. Also, try to use more precise linking words and avoid vague expressions. Clarify your points with specific reasons and correct grammar.

예시: Yes, I believe eating snacks can be healthy if chosen wisely. For instance, choosing fruits or nuts instead of sugary or fried snacks provides essential nutrients and energy between meals. This helps me maintain focus and prevents overeating during dinner.

제안: Your answer is clear but contains a grammatical error: "Snacks was" should be "Snacks were." Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and add a concluding sentence to enrich your response.

예시: Yes, I used to eat snacks quite often when I was young. For example, I would frequently have chips or cookies after school because they were convenient and tasty. Snacks were a regular part of my daily routine, especially during playtime with friends, which made those moments enjoyable.

제안: Your answer is good but contains a typo "dis delicious" which should be "delicious." Also, use plural form "apples" when speaking generally. Try to use linking words like "and" to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: I enjoy eating a variety of snacks, but my favorite would be fruits, especially apples and bananas. They are not only delicious but also healthy, providing natural sugars and vitamins that keep me energized throughout the day. For example, I often have an apple as a mid-morning snack because it's convenient and refreshing.

× I usually eat snacks in the late afternoon around 4:00 or 5:00 PM when I feeling a bit hungry.

✓ I usually eat snacks in the late afternoon around 4:00 or 5:00 PM when I am feeling a bit hungry.

The sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' before the present participle 'feeling'. In English, the present continuous tense requires the verb 'to be' (am/is/are) plus the '-ing' form of the verb. Here, 'I feeling' is incorrect; it should be 'I am feeling'. This correction ensures proper verb tense and agreement.

× This helps maintain my focus and prevents overeating during May.

✓ This helps maintain my focus and prevents overeating during mealtime.

The word 'May' seems to be a typographical error or misused in this context. The intended meaning is likely 'meal' or 'mealtime'. Using 'May' here is incorrect as it is a month name and does not fit the context. Correcting it to 'mealtime' or 'meal' makes the sentence meaningful and grammatically correct.

× Snacks was a regular part of my daily routine, especially during playtime with friends.

✓ Snacks were a regular part of my daily routine, especially during playtime with friends.

The subject 'Snacks' is plural, so the verb should also be plural. 'Was' is singular past tense, while 'were' is plural past tense. Therefore, 'Snacks was' is incorrect; it should be 'Snacks were' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× They are not only dis delicious but also healthy, providing natural sugars and vitamins that keep me energized throughout the day.

✓ They are not only delicious but also healthy, providing natural sugars and vitamins that keep me energized throughout the day.

The word 'dis' is a typographical error and should be removed. The correct adjective is 'delicious'. This correction improves clarity and correctness of the sentence.

× For example, I often have apple as a mid morning snack because it's convenient and refreshing.

✓ For example, I often have an apple as a mid-morning snack because it's convenient and refreshing.

The noun 'apple' is singular and countable, so it requires an article 'an' before it. Also, 'mid morning' should be hyphenated as 'mid-morning' when used as a compound adjective. This correction ensures proper article usage and adjective form.