Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应注意语法和用词的准确性，例如“snack”应为复数形式“snacks”，并且句子结构可以更自然流畅。此外，可以使用连接词使回答更连贯。

예시: I usually eat snacks at night because it's been a long time since dinner, so I feel hungry and need something to satisfy my stomach. For example, I prefer having milk and bread as my snacks at that time.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，如“await eating them now”不合适。建议使用更准确的表达，并增加连接词使内容更连贯。

예시: No, I don't think eating snacks is healthy for me because they usually contain high levels of fats and sugar, which can harm our body. Therefore, I try to avoid eating them now.

제안: 回答中有多处语法错误和表达不清，如“price price”、“get high rent”等。建议使用正确的词汇和句子结构，并使内容更具体和连贯。

예시: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was younger. My mom used to give me snacks as a prize when I achieved good grades in my class. This made me feel rewarded and motivated.

제안: 回答较为简单，可以通过使用更多连接词和丰富词汇使表达更自然流畅，同时注意冠词的使用，如“the bread”应为“bread”。

예시: I prefer sweet snacks, such as milk chocolate and bread. Additionally, I also enjoy salty snacks like potato chips, which are among my favorites.

× I usually eat snack at night.

✓ I usually eat snacks at night.

snack 是可数名词，表示零食，通常用复数形式表示多种零食或零食的总称。这里表示习惯性吃零食，应使用复数形式 snacks。

× I prefer the milk and bread as my snacks at that time.

✓ I prefer milk and bread as my snacks at that time.

milk 是不可数名词，前面不需要加定冠词 the。bread 也是不可数名词，表示面包的总称，不需要加 the。

× The snacks always contain fats, high levels of fats and sugar which make our body in a bad condition.

✓ The snacks always contain fats, high levels of fats and sugar which make our body in a bad condition.

此句中 'make our body in a bad condition' 结构不正确，应改为 'make our body be in a bad condition' 或更自然的表达。此处未涉及代词错误，故不改。

× So I await eating them now.

✓ So I avoid eating them now.

await 是正式用词，且后面直接跟动词-ing 形式不正确。此处应使用 avoid 表示避免，符合语境。

× My mom always give me the snacks as a price price after I achieve something like get high rent in my class.

✓ My mom always gave me snacks as a prize after I achieved something like getting high marks in my class.

描述过去习惯动作，动词应使用过去时 gave 和 achieved。price 应为 prize（奖品）。get high rent 应为 get high marks（高分）。

× My mom always give me the snacks as a price price after I achieve something like get high rent in my class.

✓ My mom always gave me snacks as a prize after I achieved something like getting high marks in my class.

the snacks 前不需要定冠词 the，表示泛指零食。

× That make me more that make me think it's rewarding.

✓ That made me think it was rewarding.

句子结构混乱，重复且时态不一致。应简化为过去时态的完整句子。

× I prefer sweet snacks, for example milk chocolate and the bread.

✓ I prefer sweet snacks, for example milk chocolate and bread.

bread 是不可数名词，不需要加定冠词 the。

× Also I am keen on salty snacks too.

✓ Also, I am keen on salty snacks too.

句首加逗号以符合书面表达习惯。

× Potato chips are also my favorite.

✓ Potato chips are also my favorite.

此句无语法错误，chips 复数形式正确。