Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构不完整，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，注意时态和主谓一致，避免重复表达。

예시: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon because that's when I feel relaxed. Having a snack helps me feel more energetic to work later in the evening.

제안: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，逻辑不连贯。建议使用简单明了的句子，明确表达观点，并用连接词衔接句子。

예시: I think eating snacks does not affect my health much because I exercise regularly. This helps me stay fit despite snacking.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和用词错误，如"is next"和"sand"。建议注意词汇准确性，句子结构清晰，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young. I liked many kinds, such as lollipops, French fries, and biscuits. However, my mother always limited how much I could eat to keep me healthy.

제안: 回答较完整，但句子衔接稍显生硬，部分语法错误。建议使用更多连接词，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: When I was young, I enjoyed French fries, biscuits, and lollipops. However, now I find that lollipops and biscuits are too sweet, and French fries are too oily, which is unhealthy. Therefore, I prefer low-calorie snacks like nuts because they are better for my health.

× Well I only eat snacks during afternoon because I found that the time I feel relaxed and I want to have some snacks to freshen me up in order to makes me feel more energetic to work at night and I think.

✓ Well, I only eat snacks during the afternoon because I find that it is the time I feel relaxed and want to have some snacks to freshen me up in order to make me feel more energetic to work at night, I think.

句中时态应保持一致，描述习惯性动作时应使用一般现在时。'found'应改为'find'，'makes'应改为'make'，以符合主语和时态。

× Well actually it is next doesn't affect my health condition maybe because I always do regular workouts to makes me feel keep fit.

✓ Well, actually it doesn't affect my health condition, maybe because I always do regular workouts to keep fit.

句中'makes me feel keep fit'结构不正确，应改为'to keep fit'，表示目的。'doesn't affect'前多余的'next'应删除。

× Well I think yes and when I was young I is next quite frequently and I fancy a wide range of snacks like lollipops, French fries and biscuits.

✓ Well, I think yes, and when I was young I ate snacks quite frequently and I fancied a wide range of snacks like lollipops, French fries and biscuits.

'I is next quite frequently'语法错误，应改为'I ate snacks quite frequently'，动词时态和主谓一致错误。

× Well I think yes and when I was young I is next quite frequently and I fancy a wide range of snacks like lollipops, French fries and biscuits.

✓ Well, I think yes, and when I was young I ate snacks quite frequently and I fancied a wide range of snacks like lollipops, French fries and biscuits.

描述过去习惯时应使用过去时，'fancy'应改为'fancied'，'ate'替代错误的'is next'。

× I thought they were all mouth watering but my mom always limited the amount of sand I consume every day to ensure my health.

✓ I thought they were all mouth-watering, but my mom always limited the amount of snacks I consumed every day to ensure my health.

'amount of sand'应为'amount of snacks'，'amount'用于不可数名词，'snacks'为可数名词应使用'amount'或'number'，此处语境用'amount'也可接受。

× But now I find that lollipops and biscuits are too sweet and French fries are too oily and which are not good for my health.

✓ But now I find that lollipops and biscuits are too sweet and French fries are too oily, which are not good for my health.

'and which are not good'中'and'多余，应去掉，使句子结构正确。

× Instead I prefer some low calorie snacks like nuts which is better for my health.

✓ Instead, I prefer some low-calorie snacks like nuts which are better for my health.

'nuts which is better'中'nuts'为复数，谓语动词应为'are'，保持主谓一致。