Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语言不够自然，有重复和犹豫，且表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复和语法错误，例如“maintaining to a balanced debt”应为“maintaining a balanced diet”。

예시: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon, around 3 pm, to keep my energy up between meals.

제안: 回答中有较多犹豫词和重复，表达不够流畅。建议使用连贯的句子，避免重复，并用具体词汇表达观点。

예시: I don't think eating snacks is very healthy, so I try to balance my diet by choosing both healthy and occasional treats.

제안: 回答结构混乱，语法错误明显，表达不完整。建议直接回答问题并补充具体细节，避免语法错误。

예시: Yes, when I was young, I often ate unhealthy snacks because my mother used to give them to me as a way to show her love.

제안: 回答中词汇使用不准确（如“sugars”应为“sweets”），句子结构不完整，表达不自然。建议使用准确词汇并完善句子结构。

예시: I like to eat snacks such as chocolate, sweets, and cakes because they help me relax.

× I like eating snacks.

✓ I like to eat snacks.

动词后接动名词或不定式都可以，但在此句中，使用不定式更符合习惯表达。

× maintaining to a balanced debt is more important

✓ maintaining a balanced diet is more important

这里应使用名词'diet'（饮食）而非'debt'（债务），且动词后不加介词'to'。

× I think it is not healthy.

✓ I don't think it is healthy.

否定表达中，使用'don't think'更自然，避免双重否定。

× maintain a balanced health

✓ maintain good health

'health'不可数名词前通常不加形容词'balance'，应使用'good health'表达健康状况。

× I, I eat a lot of unhealthy food because my mother.

✓ I ate a lot of unhealthy food because of my mother.

描述过去的动作应使用过去时'eat'改为'ate'，且表达原因时应使用介词短语'because of'。

× gave me true love.

✓ gave me true love.

此句无语法错误，保持原句。

× such as chocolate, sugars and cakes

✓ such as chocolate, sugar and cakes

'sugar'作为不可数名词不加复数形式，'sugars'错误。

× I have more relax.

✓ I feel more relaxed.

'relax'是动词，需用形容词'relaxed'来描述感受，且加上动词'feel'使句子完整。