Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat natural but lacks clarity and coherence. Try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure by using linking words. Also, be specific about the types of snacks you enjoy.

예시: I usually eat snacks on weekends when I have free time to relax. For example, I enjoy having Maggi noodles and burgers because they are quick and tasty.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and detailed. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons why snacks can be unhealthy.

예시: I think eating snacks is not very healthy because they often contain a lot of oil and sugar, which can cause health problems. Therefore, I limit myself to eating snacks only on weekends.

제안: Your answer is short and lacks proper grammar and linking words. Try to form complete sentences and provide more details about the occasions when you ate snacks.

예시: Yes, I often ate snacks like burgers, noodles, and pizza when I was young, especially during special occasions such as birthdays and festivals.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more natural expressions and clearer sentence structure. Explain why you like pizza and how it relates to sharing with family.

예시: Most of the time, I like to eat pizza because it is easy to share, and my family and I enjoy eating it together during our gatherings.

× For example I enjoy having Maggi noodles, burger these type of.

✓ For example, I enjoy having Maggi noodles and burgers of these types.

The original sentence incorrectly mixes singular and plural forms ('burger' singular and 'these type' which should be plural). The correction uses plural 'burgers' and 'these types' to agree in number, improving clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Well this is not good for our health because it's very harmful and many type of health issues so that's why I enjoy snacks only on weekends.

✓ Well, this is not good for our health because it's very harmful and causes many types of health issues, so that's why I enjoy snacks only on weekends.

The phrase 'many type of health issues' is incorrect because 'type' should be plural to match 'many'. Changing it to 'many types' corrects the singular/plural mismatch.

× Of course, yes, I eat burger, noodles, pizza, especially some occasions.

✓ Of course, yes, I ate burgers, noodles, and pizza, especially on some occasions.

The question is about past habits, so the verb should be in past tense 'ate' instead of 'eat'. Also, plural forms 'burgers' and the preposition 'on' before 'some occasions' are added for correctness.

× Of course, yes, I eat burger, noodles, pizza, especially some occasions.

✓ Of course, yes, I ate burgers, noodles, and pizza, especially on some occasions.

The singular 'burger' should be plural 'burgers' to match the list of items and maintain consistency.

× Most of time I like to eat pizza because that is a part of sharing purpose and we enjoy with my family members.

✓ Most of the time, I like to eat pizza because it is part of the sharing experience, and we enjoy it with my family members.

The phrase 'Most of time' should be 'Most of the time'. 'Part of sharing purpose' is unclear and corrected to 'part of the sharing experience'. Also, 'enjoy with my family members' needs the object 'it' to clarify what is enjoyed.