Snacks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够直接，句子结构混乱，缺乏连贯性。建议回答时先直接回答问题，然后用简洁的句子说明原因，避免重复和语法错误。

예시: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon because I feel hungry between meals.

제안: 回答缺乏连贯性，表达不完整，语法错误较多。建议用完整句子表达观点，并用连接词使回答更流畅。

예시: I think eating too many snacks is unhealthy because it can cause weight gain, but sometimes I find it hard to stop.

제안: 回答内容混乱，语法错误严重，表达不清。建议先明确回答问题，再用简单句说明原因，避免使用错误的词汇。

예시: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young because I liked them, but I tried to eat less to avoid gaining weight.

제안: 回答过于简单且语法错误。建议用具体的词汇描述喜欢的零食，并用完整句子表达。

예시: I like to eat sweet snacks such as chocolate and candies.

× I can't stop to eat snacks.

✓ I can't stop eating snacks.

动词stop后应接动名词形式，表示停止做某事。这里应使用stop eating而不是stop to eat。

× It's more snacks.

✓ It's too many snacks.

more通常用于比较级，表示“更多”，此处应表达“太多”，应使用too many来修饰可数名词snacks。

× Many snacks will make me put on weight.

✓ Eating many snacks will make me put on weight.

句子缺少主语，直接用Many snacks不完整，需加动词eating构成主语短语。

× I don't want to me become fat so I will eat them shorts.

✓ I don't want to become fat so I will eat them shortly.

'to me become fat'结构错误，正确应为'to become fat'；'eat them shorts'中'shorts'用词错误，应为副词'shortly'表示“很快”。

× I like to eat something of sugar.

✓ I like to eat something with sugar.

短语'something of sugar'不正确，表示含糖的东西应使用'with sugar'。